|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:29 pm
It's a bit weird how we're all suddenly related like this...
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:33 pm
Indigo Project Undakai wait...if I'm Muffins Uncle...that makes me Sanzo's brother...(just realized just how close the relation was...sry, kinda slow today...2 and 2 equals...umm...duuu...4) And since I'm her twin, that makes you my brother too. @__@...Well, I guess it makes sence that all the ATG kitsune's are related...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:34 pm
And yet I'm still the one married to Jim.
I love how this works out.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:39 pm
Sanzoskitsune I wish I could help but I can't figure out where to go with this and the only thing I'm good at is writing XP
Hah, and I'm here kind of regreting becoming one of the writers...I'm really not sure what I can exactly bring to the table...@.@
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:44 pm
wakusei Sanzoskitsune I wish I could help but I can't figure out where to go with this and the only thing I'm good at is writing XP
Hah, and I'm here kind of regreting becoming one of the writers...I'm really not sure what I can exactly bring to the table...@.@ I'm sure you'll think of something and it'll be great =^_^= don't doubt yourself
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:49 pm
wakusei Sanzoskitsune I wish I could help but I can't figure out where to go with this and the only thing I'm good at is writing XP
Hah, and I'm here kind of regreting becoming one of the writers...I'm really not sure what I can exactly bring to the table...@.@Well, I think once Jim has the first part of the script done (like he said he would do) we can see what direction things are going in and that should make your jobs a lot easier 3nodding (Starting and ending are the two hardest parts 3nodding )
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:00 pm
Undakai Starting and ending are the two hardest parts Really? So, that's why I have a hard time trying to make a beginning in any of the stories i've worked on... xp
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:01 pm
I usually have great beginnings... at least I think so.. I dunno XP
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:03 pm
If Sanzo read the link I gave her she knows I'm horrible with starting.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:05 pm
Aww you're not horrible Celestial! *hugs* I think your opening was pretty good... as long as you explain stuff later its all good yep yep
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:08 pm
I like making the reader wonder and then coming out with an explanation. I think I know the explanation that you're talking about. I explain. I do.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:08 pm
Erius Yes but this is like some sort of...members only thingie, even though it has open spots for people, only the same people post in here, over and over. It's not something like Jimmys story either, which is intended as a thankyou towards the whole guild. This is just ...like...basking in your own created sunlight I dunno how to explain it, but it repels me... I don't think "outsiders" like me want to post here... I dunno -_-, it just feels too much separated. Like a small group of people working on something big, inside a community who has no business with it. Don't mind me...I bet this one of my bizarre perception thingums... Actually Erius, I wholeheartedly agree with you. The only thing that's keeping me in this thread is the fact that I'm apprently needed. I don't want to hurt feelings, or anything, and tats mostly why I'm saying this, because I think that in the end this thread hurts mroe feelings then it helps. However, I think we have something with potential. Even if it turns out to be the biggest piece of vanity crap ever porduced we should keep going, at least so we can write it down in the history books that we tried to make something that was potentically one of the coolest things ever. We hoave our production teams set up, we've pumped quite a bit of thought into this, as long as everyone accepts that it might eventually go the way of "Captain Gaia" I think we should attempt to make it something good.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:09 pm
Good! Actually I like leaving readers in the dark about stuff till a bit later in the story, If I can keep secrets till the end all the better =^_^=
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:21 pm
MrJimmy Erius Yes but this is like some sort of...members only thingie, even though it has open spots for people, only the same people post in here, over and over. It's not something like Jimmys story either, which is intended as a thankyou towards the whole guild. This is just ...like...basking in your own created sunlight I dunno how to explain it, but it repels me... I don't think "outsiders" like me want to post here... I dunno -_-, it just feels too much separated. Like a small group of people working on something big, inside a community who has no business with it. Don't mind me...I bet this one of my bizarre perception thingums... Actually Erius, I wholeheartedly agree with you. The only thing that's keeping me in this thread is the fact that I'm apprently needed. I don't want to hurt feelings, or anything, and tats mostly why I'm saying this, because I think that in the end this thread hurts mroe feelings then it helps. However, I think we have something with potential. Even if it turns out to be the biggest piece of vanity crap ever porduced we should keep going, at least so we can write it down in the history books that we tried to make something that was potentically one of the coolest things ever. We hoave our production teams set up, we've pumped quite a bit of thought into this, as long as everyone accepts that it might eventually go the way of "Captain Gaia" I think we should attempt to make it something good. If this ain't the real thing, why post the draftworks here? Incomplete stuff like this makes it look like "Wow lets write 4847263847 pages about that character, using one liners, interesting right?!" The result may be worth it, but this is...silly...it's about as interesting as listening to someone explaining every knot in a carpet while it's being knotted/knitted whatever. I'm going puke all over the place if I see the final product sporting posts like this again. Why not fill the whole internet with Muffin, eh o_O?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:22 pm
Okay, let me just sort of lay out what I have planned wfor the first chapter. I call it "A Happy Accident"
I kind of want it to open up in a cave. My idea was for Sanzo to be travaling to Jimmy's cave to break the news to him about what happoned. I'm writing this part first, I can go into more detail about it soon.
The second portion is supposed to be Muffin getting ready for the first day of whatever grade of school he's in, Sophomore in highschool right? He'll go through the motions, of greeting his mother and the border they have living with them (Eine), and possibly Undaki, who came over to visit and have breakfast. I need an opinion on this part, I was thinking in order to show that Undakai was a rich b*****d, we could have him pay for Muffin's private school, anyone like that idea?
Anyway, after that he decides he needs to get somethings from "dad's" house, which just happens to be directly across the street in a nearly identical house. On the way over, we meet Waku, something hilerious happens involving binoculars and patatos.
That's about as far as I've gotten. Any imput on what I have so far?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
