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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:26 pm
LOL Jimmy I like it! I actually like the way you have the housing set up too 3nodding I approve but um... I guess its up to the other writers sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:28 pm
Yes, the housingg is set up nicely. The part about showing Undakai being rich and such by having him pay for the tuition is good too. It is up to the other writers though.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:28 pm
Erius If this ain't the real thing, why post the draftworks here? Incomplete stuff like this makes it look like "Wow lets write 4847263847 pages about that character, using one liners, interesting right?!" The result may be worth it, but this is...silly...it's about as interesting as listening to someone explaining every knot in a carpet while it's being knotted/knitted whatever. I'm going puke all over the place if I see the final product sporting posts like this again. Why not fill the whole internet with Muffin, eh o_O? I don't know what to tell you buddy. I get where youre coming from, but I don't know what to tell you. I know that I personally am driven by a love for my fictitious son. I can't really explain why I'm in love with a piece of paper connected to an idea, I'm sure that it's deeply rooted in my subconcious somewhere, and has some relevancy with the fact that I make better friends over the internet then I do out here where I live. If I had a real son, I'm sure it would mean nothing to me, but again, I can't explain it to you.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:31 pm
Well you could say: This is rediculous guys, let's plan this somewhere else and surprise the guild with a well made graphic novel...
Instead of writing down everything here for us to spoil ourselves o_O, and don't use that "Noone is forcing you to read this" argument, 'cause I will hold that against you, un-blockable o_O
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:33 pm
Erius Well you could say: This is rediculous guys, let's plan this somewhere else and surprise the guild with a well made graphic novel... Instead of writing down everything here for us to spoil ourselves o_O, and don't use that "Noone is forcing you to read this" argument, 'cause I will hold that against you, un-blockable o_O I have to say for me... I want to know XP I'm nosy I like spoiling things for myself. That and it gets me all excited for when this finally pops up!
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:34 pm
I will so laugh at your work if it doesn't live up to this, so make it count razz
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:36 pm
Erius I will so laugh at your work if it doesn't live up to this, so make it count razz You're so horrible! LOL
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:38 pm
I do my best redface ...okay I'm outta here again, go wild and stuff xp
Gotta lead my space elves to war and stuff
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:39 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:40 pm
*salutes Eris* You rock and have fun with the space elves LOL
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:44 pm
Erius Well you could say: This is rediculous guys, let's plan this somewhere else and surprise the guild with a well made graphic novel... Instead of writing down everything here for us to spoil ourselves o_O, and don't use that "Noone is forcing you to read this" argument, 'cause I will hold that against you, un-blockable o_O Okay, I'm going to use the "This is the guild's manga too" argument printed at least twice in the first post. And then I'm going to use the "Do you have a better place where we can all discuss this?" argument, taking into account that we can't easily record everything in the IRC, or might not have compatible messengers. And now I'm going to use the "Its just sum internetz" argument, which works against everything that happens on said internetz, and I'm going to ask if it really matters, and, if yes, why? And I hope hat some day, weather or not this turns out well or compleatly fails, we can all laugh at it. So stop patronizing us.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:00 pm
I'm not sure if Celes's character is aware of Muffin's transformations or not. Well, here's a little comedy piece i've put together. This takes place probably near the beginning/middle of the story. It takes place in a forest, yet i don't know where i got the forest from...oh, well:
Indigo: Just dump it somewhere. That lake water sample's usless.
Flea: As you wish, Ms. Indigo. *throws the glass of water deeper into the forest which happens to land on Muffin*
Muffin: *Transfroms and rips pair of pants* Man, That was my birthday present from Celes! She's gonna kill me when she finds out! Where'd that water come from anyway!?
Celestial Burden: *running down the dark forest* Hey, Muffin! I've got you something!
Muffin: Yip!*hides behind a tree near the lake* I-I mean, Thanks! J-just leave it on the floor and leave!
Celestial Burden: What!? After you called me to meet you here you're just gonna get rid of me, like that? *looks around* Where are you?
Muffin: *peers from the back of the tree* N-no! It's nothing like that! It's just...I, um, have this condition. Yeah! That's it! I have a condition that flares up when I'm near, um, trees! Yeah, trees!
Celestial Burden: *finds muffin peeking from the tree* There you are! I found you! Then why are you near a tree? *gasp* Don't tell me...*evil-eye* You ripped my birthday present to you didn't you!
Muffin: Yip! *sweat* I, uh, I...Hey, what's that behind you!
Cestial Burden: *turns around to look* Ack! Please don't be some spider-thingy! You better not be pulling my leg Muffin!
Muffin: (sorry about that Celes...but I can't let anyone find out what i look like when I get water on me...) *jumps into the lake behind him*
I'm sorry if this was a bad time to post one of my ideas or if it is not to your liking...
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:07 pm
I like it. I don't know if I know or not. Perhaps That's how I can find out. Oh, by the way, I hasppen to love ghosts and things like that so you may want to change it to like..spiders. I'm acracniphobic.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:11 pm
Celestial Burden I like it. I don't know if I know or not. Perhaps That's how I can find out. Oh, by the way, I hasppen to love ghosts and things like that so you may want to change it to like..spiders. I'm acracniphobic. Understood. Any suggestion on what I should put?
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:14 pm
Like as to what's behind me? Spiders. I hate spiders.
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