well, whatever it is! I'm a bit too busy right now, but i'll have more time over the weekend.
sorry about that! just a heads up c:
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:50 pm
Vishkah
Elyralith darling, as soon as you are the least bit inspired may I please have a Sparkling Rate and a proposal of marriage?
That just feels like a necessary engagement for me to have. emotion_dowant
♛ I am the one and only BBNSZT
I am ready! Also, I am going to combine them into one, since I am lazy XD
The flower petals danced in wind, swirling around the two lone figures on the hill. "It's been a while, hasn't it?" "...yeah. I've missed you." Quiet words were exchanged as the past memories reawakened. Soon, the two were lost in their own words, forgetting everything but each other. "You know, I was going to..." "Yes?" "Ahh, nevermind. It's kind of embarrassing to say." "Oh, please tell! Who knows we might not have another chance!" He laughs at her words, but it rang bittersweet. "Don't say that. You'll jinx it." "Don't look like that! Just tell me what you were going to say and everything will be fine!" There is a pause, as the wind stops. A few flower petals still spin in the air, supported by an imaginary wind. "They say that spring is bittersweet. A time for goodbyes and hellos. A time for a new beginning, but you first must lose the past." "Hm? Was that what you wanted to tell me?" "No, not really. But I guess it is really too late now..." "For what?" "I was going to propose to you, but now..." He turns to her. "...I can't go back to the past." "..." "It was nice seeing you again."
The wind starts up again, but there are no flower petals anymore. The trees are bare and the ground is covered in a light dusting of snow. A small bouquet of flowers lay on their memory hill.
"I would have said yes, you know."
i wonder what happened to me. hmm XD
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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:57 pm
Lady Lilith Mistfang
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SHORT DESCRIPTION: 7/10 Your avi is really cute! I like it c: Hmm, let's see...the first thing I noticed is that the blue paw print thing doesn't match with anything else. It stands out, which is great! But it un-balances the avi. The purple tail and your eyes are both purple, but they are different shades, so they don't go together as well-unless the whole avi was completely covered in random purple items or something haha.
The pinks all look the same (except for the paw thing haha), so good job with that!
I would suggest trying to match up the colors more--maybe find a different tail and hand-held item all together? Her face, head, and chest (ahaha) all look a bit too simple to me. A necklace, some make up/glasses/cute something, and some hair accessory would really spruce up your avi!
not bad c:
SPARKLING RATE: REALLY QUICK ONE SINCE these are really too much work haha
With a lazy swish of her tail, and a quick swipe of her paw, victory was hers. It was really too easy for her. Sometimes she wondered why she even bothered to try! Humans really are too silly. As if a paw-shaped toy could stand against her!
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 10:51 pm
Elyralith
May I please have a rate?
Username: Sheshira
Avi or tektek you want rated: current avatar
Type of rate you want: boring and short or long
Extra info: I'm in love with the Dean (NPC Surl E Dean) and we match heartlol
Elyralith darling, as soon as you are the least bit inspired may I please have a Sparkling Rate and a proposal of marriage?
That just feels like a necessary engagement for me to have. emotion_dowant
♛ I am the one and only BBNSZT
I am ready! Also, I am going to combine them into one, since I am lazy XD
The flower petals danced in wind, swirling around the two lone figures on the hill. "It's been a while, hasn't it?" "...yeah. I've missed you." Quiet words were exchanged as the past memories reawakened. Soon, the two were lost in their own words, forgetting everything but each other. "You know, I was going to..." "Yes?" "Ahh, nevermind. It's kind of embarrassing to say." "Oh, please tell! Who knows we might not have another chance!" He laughs at her words, but it rang bittersweet. "Don't say that. You'll jinx it." "Don't look like that! Just tell me what you were going to say and everything will be fine!" There is a pause, as the wind stops. A few flower petals still spin in the air, supported by an imaginary wind. "They say that spring is bittersweet. A time for goodbyes and hellos. A time for a new beginning, but you first must lose the past." "Hm? Was that what you wanted to tell me?" "No, not really. But I guess it is really too late now..." "For what?" "I was going to propose to you, but now..." He turns to her. "...I can't go back to the past." "..." "It was nice seeing you again."
The wind starts up again, but there are no flower petals anymore. The trees are bare and the ground is covered in a light dusting of snow. A small bouquet of flowers lay on their memory hill.
"I would have said yes, you know."
i wonder what happened to me. hmm XD
Ahh, we both just got completely lost in a moment!
I love it so much. Thank you. <3
Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 4:49 pm
Elyralith
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SHORT DESCRIPTION: 7/10 Your avi is really cute! I like it c: Hmm, let's see...the first thing I noticed is that the blue paw print thing doesn't match with anything else. It stands out, which is great! But it un-balances the avi. The purple tail and your eyes are both purple, but they are different shades, so they don't go together as well-unless the whole avi was completely covered in random purple items or something haha.
The pinks all look the same (except for the paw thing haha), so good job with that!
I would suggest trying to match up the colors more--maybe find a different tail and hand-held item all together? Her face, head, and chest (ahaha) all look a bit too simple to me. A necklace, some make up/glasses/cute something, and some hair accessory would really spruce up your avi!
not bad c:
SPARKLING RATE: REALLY QUICK ONE SINCE these are really too much work haha
With a lazy swish of her tail, and a quick swipe of her paw, victory was hers. It was really too easy for her. Sometimes she wondered why she even bothered to try! Humans really are too silly. As if a paw-shaped toy could stand against her!
I never really had feedback on any of my avatars before, but this was fun! biggrin The hair items are actually kitsune's sister bangs, and Light Adrian Hair. I thought the camouflage of the hair items worked perfectly, haha. Thank you! ^u^
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Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:19 pm
Vishkah
Ahh, we both just got completely lost in a moment!
I love it so much. Thank you. <3
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i'm glad you like it c:
also! added you to the raffle~ thanks for the cheepz you wonderful person, you <3
Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:22 pm
Lady Lilith Mistfang
I never really had feedback on any of my avatars before, but this was fun! biggrin The hair items are actually kitsune's sister bangs, and Light Adrian Hair. I thought the camouflage of the hair items worked perfectly, haha. Thank you! ^u^
♛ I am the one and only BBNSZT
ahaha, glad you enjoyed it c:
welcome!
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Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:35 pm
Sheshira
Type of rate you want: boring and short or long
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Ah, yes! The hat and the cape, right? Very cute.
BORING RATE: 7/10
SHORT DESCRIPTION: like i said, your avi is very cute. the idea of matching with an NPC is always fun! I looked at the NPC's outfit, and will try to judge your avi kinda based on him. It's not necessary, but i would suggest going with the same color scheme as this Dean person--as in all black and formal, haha. You could take this as in a black outfit, or maybe a formal outfit of some sort. He also appears to be a magician of some sort, so maybe a wand would be nice?
On your avi alone--i'll ignore the cape and the hat, since they don't match, but have a purpose.
It's not bad, haha. The face could have more expression, and the leg mod could match the shirt better--light blue on leg mod matches nothing else. The red bow also doesn't really match anything else other than the hearts, so you might want to even out the color distribution a bit more?
The avi is balanced though, so that's a plus!
Nice job c:
Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 8:07 pm
Simple rate, and Deadly rate please!!
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 10:07 am
LegionTemplarus
Simple rate, and Deadly rate please!!
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oops i didn't see this!
i can't do this right now, but i'll get to you as soon as possible~
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