Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Erverain]

The Spirit Falcon is there for what purpose?
As to the gear, I am well aware of that fact. However, it was just gathering dust, and I felt the desire to use it.  

[PendragonX9]

to break up the pure black theme
and i can understand that, in all honesty i couldn't think of anything better  

[Sentama Lin]

I would want something more detailed and nice on the chest area. Right now it's really, really plain. Perhaps the dog tags or something.  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

I do like yours (especially the wolf smile ) but what's with the guitar? if doesn't seem to fit with the rest of your avi

btw, what's the wolf called? i'd like to add it to my wishlist  

[Sentama Lin]

Your hair is the saving grace of your jacket, which I don't quite like (because it feels square and oddly-unnatural) Otherwise it's a good avi.

And c'mon... Guitar? Cowboy? ...really...? emo  

[Kusaragi]

Classic Cowboy western going on Linny, I have to say I do like seeing you in it. With all that leather and metal. xd

Rate THIS one too please. For zOMG.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

And some of my friends too Please. ^_^

 

[Black Cat Hamlet]

I really like it! if you could change the hair color to blue as well, that would be great! biggrin  

[PendragonX9]

so you've got the whole rocker thing going and thats cool but then why are you holding a shuriken and whats with the dragon?  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

PendragonX9

so you've got the whole rocker thing going and thats cool but then why are you holding a shuriken and whats with the dragon?

I never really planned the whole rocker thing really... it just fell into place I guess smile I'm actually trying to get a black wolf to either go with this or a completely diffrent avi (if this is spamming then sorry)

btw, i'll let someone else critique PendragonX9 razz  

[invisible-weirdo]

Okay so I'm critiquing Pendragon? Mmkay then...I personally like it. And I think the spirit falcon works, too wink  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

maybe you should move the imp away from your body... I can see there's a red thing on it and the imp's blocking it  

[Sentama Lin]

The jacket is just a smidge off from the colours of the other things. That's the only thing that is irking me. I don't know what's up with the dragon, but I don't know what's up with people biting bat heads on-stage either. XD  

[Phaeton]

Oooh, Sexy. um... maybe a change of boots is in order. Those ones look sort of strange. They have a fat shirt, why don't they have a muscle suit?  

[invisible-weirdo]

I like it ^.^ Though I think the Phoenix Circlet is a tad bit out of place, but it's nothing too big.

*back to homework*  

[PendragonX9]

i like except that the purple of the blade stands out from the black of your avi