Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[PendragonX9]

well about that raccoon i know you like it but it stands out a lot, well that and the guard of the rapier  

[Sentama Lin]

Is there actually anything I can critique? I understand the point of the crater, but I would actually prefer the crater to not be there.  

[Kusaragi]

I still think you need to be holding something fuzzy.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[PendragonX9]

well you could, umm...or maybe, no... sweatdrop ummm...you have no feet stare  

[Kusaragi]

SURE I do, they are just under the skirt. ^_^

I think you need to do *Something* with your eyes. ^_^ All in all it's a great avatar.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[Lobo-chan]

Hmmm, the spectral bit looks cool, but I'd say either go with that or the 'infection' black thingy, but not both... it doesn't quite fit that way, being incorporeal but not? sweatdrop  

[Sentama Lin]

The Sprite and the Spirit Falcon make me think of Summoner, which is good, but the Titan's Legacy makes me wonder... I wouldn't have it if I were me, but that's just me.  

[invisible-weirdo]

All in all, it's rather good, but there's something...'off' about the cape/shirt thingy...  

[PendragonX9]

i'm not a huge fan of the mask, it just seems to bulge out to much  

[invisible-weirdo]

Meh. It's a gas mask and gas masks are cool in my book (Ooh that actually give me an idea for the avi costume contest! *off to tektek instead of homework >.>*)

And as for yours...I believe I've already stated my love for your current avi so I won't try to even pretend to half-a** a critique gonk
EDIT:...Whoever posts after me, feel free to bypass my avi to critique Pendragon's if you want stare Since my post was merely useless text sweatdrop  

[Kusaragi]

I've critiqued Pendragons as well. So I'll give a shot to Invisible. ^_^ I actually like how the Bio-Mask compliments the Dragon and your color scheme. I think that there should be something better then your Zorro Mask. But other then that well done. ^_^
Rate THIS one too please.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

Save Xik's egg to Please

 

[PendragonX9]

well it's certainly very blue although the hair seems off some how i guess it's just not blue enough  

[Sentama Lin]

*lifts hands in air* I find the avatar to be top biscuit, old chap. I don't know what else to critique about it.

@Kusa I tried BunBun with the avatar but it just looks awkward. A wand would do wonders, but the Faerie Wand is kitschy, the Wizard's Wand is off-coloured, and the Enchanted Book wand is... well... expensive. x.x  

[Kire Kaysan]

It's a very girly, bubbly avi. It is good but very strange for you to be wearing it.  

[Arcanas]

ah Kire...why?!

The only thing I have to critique is the fact that to me, your avi's are uncritiqueable...