Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Black Cat Hamlet]

Those dual swords you have are blocking a bit of your body... maybe you would do better without them...  

[Arcanas]

...I can't figure out what you're trying to go for  

[PendragonX9]

to...many....swords *twitch* *twitch*  

[Arcanas]

(not in rotation)

psh..that's nothing...I have every sword item gaia has released

besides, a good swordsman needs a sword for every occasion...take the claymore for instance...good for taking guys off of horses.  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

Where did the heart come from??  

[invisible-weirdo]

...Hamlet, Arc said he wasn't in rotation. So you should've critiqued Pendragon instead...Even though it is incredibly hard to do so gonk

Now as for yours...I like this better. It's crisp, clean, simple, has a fairly definite theme-ish thing, and all that. My only gripe is the shoes. Brown? Really? >.>  

[Phaeton]

It's witchy. The mask is a bit unnecessary though.  

[Kusaragi]

Nice theme with the demon horns and the Rose wings, but the book kinda gets lost, you might just want to move your hand so we can see the book better.

^_^Rate THIS one as well please.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[invisible-weirdo]

Nice use of the Death Whisper there, though there's something off about the face...I can't quite tell what it is, but there's just something that doesn't seem quite right, y'know?

Now as for your little blue one:
I like it ^.^ Though for the sake of having something to critique, I'd say it's either the little face shield thingy or the plasma beam stuffs on the side of your head that you would do better without.  

[Trish the Stalker]

The bubble just doesn't make any sense whatsoever.

-La Belle Isolde-

 

[invisible-weirdo]

It's just there cuz I felt like I should be holding something. And it seemed to work better than the other things I had so...yeah.

Overall, I like it ^.^ Though maybe the torso-ish area would be better off without a frilly shirt. Something simpler, perhaps? Cuz right now, it looks a bit weird if you stare at it for a while. Of course, that's only if you stare at it really hard cuz you're looking for something to write about =P  

[PendragonX9]

the imp seems kinda out of place not bad just unnecessary  

[Phaeton]

Well, the only off thing is the white teeth. Since you're undead, maybe get one of those grills so you can have more rotten looking teeth. Possibly more menacing looking eyes too.  

[Kusaragi]

Nicely done, I have to wonder though do the black horns work better? Other then that I have no qualms about yours. ^_^

Rate THIS one too please.

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[Black Cat Hamlet]

spooky... but you do know how much the end of that lantern looks like an hourglass right?

And as for the blue one... I really like it!