Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kusaragi]

Basic, but that works in your advantage, I'm not sure you really need the moon. Nice look overall.

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[invisible-weirdo]

Nice one Kusa ^.^
Though since the little drained dude is mostly obscured by your massive pumpkin thingy, you might be better off without him.  

[Kusaragi]

He was there to obscure. It was to show the danger and the slyness of the demon. ^_^

I'm not sure you really need the scythe.

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[PendragonX9]

it seems a tad cluttered to me maybe try to shed unneeded items?  

[Dark_Pisces]

Definitely dark. I like it, though. I was like "Darth Vader..? Wait, no..." xd  

[invisible-weirdo]

I like how bright and such you are ^.^ Though the fish seem unnecessary...As does the little horse you got there (I forget which evolving item it's from) especially since you can barely see it anyway...  

[Phaeton]

I'm not sure what's going on with the eyes. Good D&D-esque undead sorc though.  

[Kusaragi]

I like your look, but I'm not sure you need the scarf for this one.

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[invisible-weirdo]

My eyes are the result of adding the Jackster Face Paint to my still zombified face 3nodding

Oh wow Kusa. Very nice. I actually think the hair goes pretty well this one. Dunno why, it just...seems to work I guess sweatdrop Though I must say that baseball bat seems sort of...strange. It's not that it doesn't work, it's just that I think it wouldn't hurt to get rid of it >.>  

[CR Kyrie]

D= I can't critique it! I don't see anything overly wrong with it. Nicely done.  

[PendragonX9]

the candle seems out of place its all black and white and then the red is just weird  

[invisible-weirdo]

It would be better without the G-blade. But I really like how the armor and the superhero aura go together and I think the color of your hair and skin are insanely awesome together 3nodding  

[Kusaragi]

the zombie skin seems a bit off. But other then that Great avatar.

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[Lobo-chan]

Hmmm, not sure if I'm liking the white bits in there... Sure, they add contrast, but... Maybe if you contrasted with something different?  

[Kusaragi]

Right... but I didn't like the blue stuff I had and I've been using red too much lately.

You have alot going on in your avatar Lobo... you probably don't need the Dark Aura, from the Halloween items.

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