Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[PendragonX9]

well aside from what Lobo said which i totally agree with would be the question is the death mood bubble really necessary? it just seems to distract from the avi as a whole  

[Arcaniroth]

it's so...soo..shiny...too shiny even  

[Dark_Pisces]

What are we trying to say here, bounty hunter?

Actually, I like it. Simple. Monochromatic. Bounty hunterish. 3nodding  

[invisible-weirdo]

I like it ^.^ Though since I need something to nitpick at, I'll say it's a bit crowded on the right side of your avi. Though, really, you've got a damn good look going right there. 3nodding  

[Vindictive Vampiress]

Not bad if you're going for a 'Cinderella' type look.  

[PendragonX9]

wow i really like it but i guess you could do without the imp it seems to exist without a purpose  

[invisible-weirdo]

*Thumbs up* ;D
I like it 3nodding Though I really wish Gaia would let you do cool poses and such, cuz an awesome avi calls for an awesome pose...  

[CR Kyrie]

Only critique would be against the mask. The black goes against the rest of the avatar.  

[Arcanas]

I'm not digging the goatee myself  

[Shram]

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With exception of the Leggings and the should pads I like the Avatar Arc.
The colours and build of the leggings and Shoulder pads doesn't suit =/

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[Erverain]

Very... monochrome, Shram. That said, the three bits of color (fairy, shadow, and angelbow) don't seem to fit.  

[Phaeton]

Drop the cape and it'll be complete. The cape stands out too much.  

[wakusei]

You're like a fine lady saying "come hither...so that I may bite off your head~" whee Nice.

I'd say just add in a bit more touches of red throughout.

 

[Erverain]

Waku looks like America. Completely messed up =D
I kid. But it is kinda cluttered.  

[PendragonX9]

Oh My God...your avi is made of epic whee i honestly cant think of anything wrong with it...though maybe a weapon or something would make it even more epic?