hollo basten (make your own character)

[Eltheord]

((hey LXVantess can you be more litterate cause i could barely understand you))
"well i'll let you two settle this" he started heading back to the castle when saw a girl lying there bleeding "oh-no hey i need some help over here" he yelled back them  

[Frank_36912]

she turned and walked away from her brother. Seeing him and the girl she ran over.
"what's wrong?"  

[Lady Vantess]

(sorry its the German leeching into my English I meant to say:
:Lady Vantess appears suddenly at the CASTLE gates a crumpled heap on the ground. Unconscious and bleeding profusely she lays on the cold stone road, waiting for a person to find her. She barely breathes, every breath growing fainter by the moment. Will she survive?:
)  

[Eltheord]

((thanks))
"i dont know she is bleeding from some were but we need to stop it some how" he didnt know what to do he was clueless and not a doctor  

[Frank_36912]

she stopped breathing ignoring the blood and carefully picked the girl up to take her into the castal  

[Squall Leonhart_576]

Yuke: *turns around and see's his daughter carrying a body and runs toward them* what happened?  

[Frank_36912]

she laid the girl down carefully "we don't know dad, we just found her out side, I'm sorry please excuse me for a moment" she walked back outside to get some fresh air  

[Eltheord]

he ran into the kitchen and found a rag and some bandages  

[Frank_36912]

when her head was clear she went back in to help them heal the new comer. she grabbed some rubbing alcohol off the table and went into the room holding her breath  

[Lady Vantess]

:Lady Lexi stirs slightly causing everyone in the room to jump back, but alas she doesn't wake.:  

[Squall Leonhart_576]

Yuke: are you ok Renzu?  

[Frank_36912]

nodded softly still holding her breath, she continued swiftly and knowledgeably cleaning the wounds of the girl and finally wrapped them when she saw that they had been cleaned 100%. she started breathing again "I'm fine dad, vampire remember? Human blood, temptation. I want to help her not kill her so I held my breath so I couldn't smell her blood any more"  

[Lady Vantess]

:Lady Lexi finally awakens, coughing: "Where am I? Who are you?" :she says:  

[Frank_36912]

"you're at our home, we don't even really know where it is. and my name's Renzu, I'm the one who healed you"