Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Arcanas]

still shiny...need darker glasses  

[PendragonX9]

the mythrill armor seems a little out of place but other wise its good  

[invisible-weirdo]

The Death Whisper wings seem a bit much, but good job nonetheless ^.^

And yes people I know the zorro mask doesn't necessarily go with my all-white-ness =P I'm working on it...  

[Kusaragi]

I think that you could probably use the Gemini Mask instead of Zorro mask. But other then that WONDERFUL princess avatar. ^_^

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[PendragonX9]

seems a little cluttered could mabey do without the furugasa? but other than that it's a great avi  

[Vindictive Vampiress]

Absolutely amazing, and should be the star of the first ever Gaian Horror Movie.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Pretty good look you got there, but the Gimpi's sorta sitting there without a purpose and the umbrella doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the scene >.>  

[Kusaragi]

The spirit falcon meshes with the Lunar Cowl so well. I like the Shaman style you have going here and I must say the overall look is flawless. Maybe you could also add the wolf from the Kelp o' th' Loch.

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[Phaeton]

Well, the fluff needs to go. Those fiery disk things are hiding your drum. A nice pair of shoes could complete the outfit.  

[Arcanas]

The hair's a bit excessive, it hides your eyes.  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

You have a WHOLE load of items there... I like simpler avis

(for mine, if there are any good items you think will go with it, let me know)  

[invisible-weirdo]

Well, I'm not quite sure which items you could use on yours (since for avis I usually fiddle around with whatever's available sweatdrop sorry) but I personally think you could do without the dagger...and the wild armor doesn't fit the wolf >.>  

[Trish the Stalker]

There's really almost nothing that matches. Pick either blue and black or red and black but all three is not working for you right now.

-La Belle Isolde-

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[PendragonX9]

well i do love that avi of yours but is the bod really necessary it just seems to detract from the experience  

[Arcanas]

Too much black.