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 Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:47 pm
Ah, you're after a performance critique. Well, your inflection is good, but will get better with practice. The more times you read it through, etc. You might slow down a bit in some spots, but for the most part, your pace is good. I thought, anyway. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:48 pm
I still don't get why you'd say Muna is Irish... sweatdrop
Anywho... I don't know where to go from where I left off confused Hmmmmm... maybe I'll need to switch over to Kiron/Bloodblade after all... he should be a bit easier to write for at the moment... which is kinda sad, seeing as how he has two personalities... sweatdrop
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:56 pm
Muna should be Irish.
Can you image the awesome accent of an Irish werewolf in werewolf form.
Bwahahahaha!
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:58 pm
Ummm, sorry... she only goes full wolf, not hybrid form... sweatdrop And fine, if Muna sounds Irish then what about Milindae? And Eiradrais? Or even Kiron? (multiple personalities xp )
Hmmm, so I just thought of something, though I might change it later... ah well.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:00 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:01 pm
This... is your brain on crack. *points to Jaft*
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:04 pm
My insanity is derived from my own power Lobo-CLAM.
Fwahahaha.
I don't need drugs to help me think.
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:06 pm
Jimmy... you'll have to explain why they want... the prophets.
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:06 pm
Okaaaaay.... I just read the whole story again so I'm all caught up... biggrin
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:06 pm
I'm a clam now? sad *cries* I don't wanna be a clam! gonk
*sniff* I should get Bloodblade to beat you up for me! ...the only problem would be keeping him from killing you... sweatdrop It's a wonder Kiron can control him at all...
ADD: Hi guys! ^.^ I'm confused somewhat by the whole prophets thing, but I'm sure we'll find out in time, eh?
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:13 pm
I can kill your Bloodblade with ease.
>:
Prophets should prophesiezeszie
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:15 pm
I feel like killing some noobs now. -_____-
I'm just a bit perplexed about the whole meeting a new person (especially the part where they shake hands) and then following orders from a complete stranger that threatened that new person. <<
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:16 pm
Jaft Prophets should prophesiezeszie
I'm not even sure one can pronounce that...o.O sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:16 pm
Noooo, don't kill Bloodblade! Without him Kiron would be dead too! crying (problems of being the same person... sorta... sweatdrop )
Anywho... it's 2 in the morning, I can't think of anything to write at present, I want to go to the bookstore later... night/morning all, I'm crawling off to bed.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:21 pm
NOOOOO!!!!
Lobo-chan has abandoned me...
I must find someone else to feed off their energies... let me check that buddy thread again.
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