Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Erverain]

Very floaty, but the fan seems a bit out of place.  

[Large Inmate]

I got it!
It's that book. It just seems to make it out of place and weird.
Not to mention the bookmark does not go with the vamp item  

[LadiSilverfox]

The color of the shoes and pants work together, however not so much with the rest of the outfit. The top half is very concentrated and dark, while the bottom half lacks both depth of color and the feeling of motion the top part expresses.  

[Large Inmate]

The staff seems to be the only thing off to me.
I think it would work better with an egyptian themed weapon.  

[penned ignorance]

looks good on the top.. but I'd go for different pants. They don't seem to go so well  

[Arcanas]

I'm not too keen on the purple frills, or the frilly thing around your neck...actually, I just don't like the frills.  

[LadiSilverfox]

Humm, very well constructed. However I feel that the dark star is out of place. I would love to see a red cloak (however those are very expensive) or maybe a well placed red scarf, because you have just that little bit of out of place red on the belt. Otherwise, a really great avi!  

[`Yikaa]

Hmm...
I like it.
But-- The paws and things are too out of place with the avatar. Those look more modern, and your avi looks more... not old, but "not that modern". I really like it, though.  

[Arcanas]

I'm not a fan of the bee outfit, nor will I ever be.

I don't really like how the G-bot looks on your head either...a cybernetic bee is just...scary.

But what really gets me though, is that you're being mean to Momo!  

[Taeryyn]

Not really my sort of thing, but it's well put together. Maybe a bit too much armour, but it works. =)  

[Magical Maiden]

Its put together rather well, although it looks like the yellow and teal hues were added in at random.

Oh well. :3  

[CR Kyrie]

I like it all except for the bag... that just throws it off =(  

[Arcanas]

I'm not really a fan of the new skins...

For some reason, they just seem to throw off the avatar. But then again, maybe I like to see the skin?  

[CR Kyrie]

From a personal standpoint, I have to say that the Mythic hair gets my attention in a bad way =/ I guess I've never liked it all that much.

Other than that, excellent =)  

[Large Inmate]

The book is so huge compared to your avy and it takes the attention away from your avy. I tend to look at it more than your avy too because it has red that draws the eye when your avy is black.
The hat doesn't look good with the avy either.
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