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@Celes-No, but ppl have said i'm a crappy writer. Ppl can't read my writing... sweatdrop

Laterz, everyone. GTG...college and stuff...

eek .....seriously, i need to sign in more.....50 pages.....wow....

Nah, thats pretty good. made me laugh. i'll tell you if i think there should be a change of what i say.

Okay- I'm sorry to say that post one, I didn't quite like. Viral has a demonic stage, what? -_O? And I thought muffin was a little out of character. He's supposed to be the timid/insecure one, usually the only time he acts relaxed, casual and brave is when he's alone with his friends. He probably would have gone to get help instead.

I also didn't know that your character was going to be in Muffin's close circle of friends like that. Once we had three, I thought that was already pushing it, as I had figured it would be most comfortable to make a story out of if we had two. Now we have five. Maybe if you put your character in a different grade, but five really active characters as always-there-friends of muffin is too much.... He could still be a canon character- I at one point imagined he would be constantly trying to help Muffin behind-the-scenes, kind of like an unnoticed masked avenger- only he often messes up and lands himself in awkward and unpleasent situations. *I.e., overhearing a plot of the evil popular kid, jumping into the janitor's closet, putting on a costume and going to foil the popular kid's plans. After disarming the terrible water-throwing machine on the school's roof, he looses his balance and falls off, getting stuck in a tree.* Muffin is totally oblivious to his actions, of course, only to notice that his cousin is running off at odd moments and always seems to show up disheveled in some manner, especially after something dramatic happens. Your character maintains the audience's sympathy, but gains some of the backbone we have to give other characters in muffin's lacking.

I probably did a horrible job explaining my idea, so I'll come back and try again later.

Post two was GREAT, though, and I really enjoyed reading it. 3nodding Mut, Jimmy and Eien were perfect. I'm not sure if you understand how timid Muffin is supposed to be though. I loved it anyway, and I again want to thank you for all these great ideas you've been giving us.

But don't feel bad at all- Post three, I also LOVED!!! rofl I thought you caught the concept of Celestial's 'ingeniously concealed' rolleyes crush absolutetly perfectly! I have to thank you for this, it's really great.

I'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh, and I suspect that I'm still being paranoid and obsessive over all of this.... but I guess one of us has to be just to keep a realistic vision.

I think that your so called paranoia about this is really making it a lot better, K0m0d0. Still, abiout the school uniform, I'm just curious if the girls have to wear skirts.

I'm still thinking intro right now, story arcs will come as they do, I only have one idea for a much later chapter as of current.

And noone says that we can't add charactors as we move through the story. Obviously yes, anybody who didn't make it in before we started won't be in the first few chapters, but students can be expelled, teachers can be replaced, and people can move away. We can use these common happonings to introduce and circulate new charactors. New charactrs always breath new life into a series, it works every time, trust me.

I've gotten a tumbs up on my script from nearly everyone who normally posts in here, the only one who I think I havn't seen in forever is Eien... but in the extended abseense of a coligue, we have to be ready to make decisions without them. He can always join in on the fun when he gets back.

So unless there's something else to worry about I may take this script over to Yoko tommrow or possibly even tonight. I'm going to start the script for Part II right now. This is me... opening my word processor.... okay it's open...

The orcs will never scale these walls ninja

And neither will the Mongoles! pirate

Good to se you Eien. Tell us if we can help.