Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Sentama Lin]

Ah, much better in my opinion. :3  

[Erverain]

Very nice. A sprite-ly design that is easy on the eyes. However, it feels like it's missing something, what it is I am unsure.  

[Sentama Lin]

The colour theme is excellent. However, it feels cluttered. A little bit of streamlining, and possible removing of unnecessary items, would make it better.  

[124-C]

It is visually stimulating, Laddy, but I'm not sure that I understand a unifying theme on this one. Unless it's just about the color blue.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Odd...But...it works actually =P I like it, I'm just not sure why...

Although the little Shadow Spirit seems a tad bit out of place, but not enough so that you need you dump him. Besides...I've gotten used to seeing him there by your side ^.^  

[Erverain]

Excellent use of a flame base, but the mask makes it a bit odd... Perhaps some other headgear?  

[Sentama Lin]

Oh, that's nice. But it's missing a bit of oomph in it; it's not very exciting.  

[Kusaragi]

I like the overall look, but I think that either the guitar or the sword should go. Trying to be a cowboy ninja just doesn't seem to work too well. xd

I like how the rest of it fits either, but putting them together seems to take away from the overall look.

Let's try to raise another one ^_^

 

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

I honestly don't know what (Or how) to critique on this guy, hmm...I think the hat is a little....batty? maybe?  

[Kusaragi]

I usually like to critique based on how well the items go together or how often well the overall look is thought through. ^_^ But everyone has a different scale on how they judge. ^_^

I think you need something with a little more flare, or just something to go with those nice wolf gloves you have.

Let's try to raise another one ^_^

 

[Phaeton]

It would be great if the layering didn't cause some issues with the horns. I think it's mostly those and the little fronds of gray coming off your arms and legs that bug me.  

[Sentama Lin]

The style seemed to scream Square-Enix to me. The jacket, along with oversised sword, reminded me of later Final Fantasy games and other recent titles.

Probably the only thing I don't enjoy too much are the stockings. Looking at the avatar, the stockings seem to detract my attention away from the other items and make me focus on them.  

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

I think the wolf looks great, but the other stuff, doesn't really look right together...