Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[wakusei]

Hmm, I like the facial expression but you need shoes to better balance out your hairstyle and I'm not sure I understand the point of the animal gloves? If you're going for an animals thing, I'd suggest more items to represent that... 3nodding

 

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

Sadly, at this point, that was the only thing in the set I could afford...too bright!!! Make it stop!!!! (That avi of yours I mean)  

[Erverain]

I can't see any facial expression on yours, Waku. It all runs together nicely, but a face is essential, don't you think?
Damn, I got undercut.
Anyway, the gloves don't really work for that. Maybe a different pair of gloves would work better.  

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

I'm trying to get the rest of the set....but anyways......I.....don't actually know what to say about that avi... sweatdrop  

[invisible-weirdo]

I essentially agree with what everyone else has said about yours. It's a nice start, but the gloves don't quite go with the rest of your outfit.

Anyway, the real reason I'm posting is cuz I want to say one thing:
Erv...You look like a math teacher >.>
(Why math? I have no idea, but you just do <.<)  

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

Umm....I like fire....btw, I know I have poor fashion sense, but plz bare with me, I'm a guy for Christ's sake...I can't help but have bad fashion... sweatdrop  

[Erverain]

Well, I'm a guy too. My sense of aesthetics is no better than yours.
But an eyeball? I don't quite know where you were heading with this.  

[124-C]

*adjusts glasses* He looks like a philosopher.

I generally dislike it. The shirt doesn't play well with the jacket, the mustache looks terrible, the paper-roll looks out of place, the pants don't match the rest of the avatar...

I like the glasses though.  

[Erverain]

So, what, a philosopher can't do crosswords in his off-time? Mr. Pineapple Man? We all know those goggles do nothing, so why wear them?
*Grump grump grump*  

[PandyChibi]

I cant say I care much for this avi sweatdrop I dont like the mustache.... or that suit in brown ><; it looks... kinda off to me. sweatdrop  

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

I like the panda....and the wings............End.  

[PendragonX9]

it look like you have really dry eyes...eye  

[Erverain]

The cape's a bit out of place, but otherwise it works well.  

[wakusei]

Some of it gets lost in all the black, but it all goes within the theme which is good.

 

[Erverain]

It's Wakusei, the red, white, and blue firecracker!
Is it odd that I think a good portion of the face should be visible?