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 Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:45 pm
Well Jiro, it kind of is. It's slam poetry, that's what it's supposed to sound like.
Eien...I want to hear anything from anyone that has anything at all to say.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:46 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:47 pm
Eien? *tightens grip on her* where?
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:48 pm
I don't like the theam of your poem
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:49 pm
I see. Forgive me then; I'm not versed in Slam Poetry as of yet. Sorry...
Lin is way too classical-oriented. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:49 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:49 pm
Well, I didn't ask if you liked the theme, I asked if there was anything I could do to possibly make it more powerful.
EDIT: Neither wasI until the beggining of this week, Jiro. Neiher was I so I can understand what you mean there.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:50 pm
Viral C Eien? *tightens grip on her* where? *is still comfortable* look last page at the second to the last post...
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:50 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:51 pm
what's up Dark..still up high?
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:52 pm
Arcanas what's up Dark..still up high? You know it Arc
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:52 pm
pnytenshi Viral C Eien? *tightens grip on her* where? *is still comfortable* look last page at the second to the last post... oh i see. thank you *tightens grip*
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:53 pm
Dark_Wyvern Arcanas what's up Dark..still up high? You know it Arc good times man, good times
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:54 pm
Arcanas Dark_Wyvern Arcanas what's up Dark..still up high? You know it Arc good times man, good times Sure are man
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:56 pm
*re-appears* Hmm.. Sorry guys I was trying to take a good picture 3nodding
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