Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Erverain]

Well, the thing on your back is the only thing that throws me off. What is that anyway?
And you are Phaeton's mule, right? Not some erstwhile sibling or clone?  

[invisible-weirdo]

Hm....I'm not liking the frost sword there. =/ It doesn't seem to add anything and it's sort of....just there.

Oh and whoever critiques mine, keep in mind that mine is barefoot because I don't have any shoes that go with it sweatdrop I'm open to any suggestions, but until then, barefoot'll do.  

[CaucasianNoodles]

hmm, well, I would use regular legs for that outfit instead of the...tail thing. But other wise. Nice avi ^.^  

[ethereal - - LUNA]

I pretty much like it as a whole, however I am personally not fond of the vampire mouth and it doesn't really match...  

[PendragonX9]

the crown and the star really don't match the rest of the avi  

[ethereal - - LUNA]

I like it. It matches well.

As for mine, I am participating in the birthday event and am therefore removing one item a day. The crown and hair pin matched a day or two ago...  

[Oddplume]

Hmm... it seems rather off the wall to me. It is as if every item there stands alone in this crowd rather than there being any unity between them.  

[wakusei]

Needs a bit better color balance. Like green around the feet, more blue throughout, and maybe a black sort of headpiece and a little less black all throughout the torso.

 

[CaucasianNoodles]

I personaly wouldnt have so much on my avitar. But, its your avi. ^.^  

[invisible-weirdo]

It's nice. Simplistic.
However, it wouldn't hurt to add a little something more to it. Maybe just to add a little of that 'wow'-ness to it.  

[124-C]

I'm not sure what that is hanging from your crotch, but I find it exceedingly distracting...  

[Roland Karloseth]

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

It goes toghether fairly well, it's just that the pipe (if that's what it is) Seems to just be hanging out there, not really tied into the avatar somehow.

To whoever posts after me: I'm doing a Lloyd Irving cosplay

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?

 

[Elcia]

Don't know Lloyd Irving but it looks okay on its own. Well actually I looked it up, you're almost spot on.  

[Roland Karloseth]

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

Your a frog.

Thankee! The only problem with it is it's missing the white scarf-like thing he wears.

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?