Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Phaeton 2]

It's Lloyd allright. I used to frequent a ToS thread way back when so people were cosplaying characters left and right. I wish you chose different pants.

Cosplay Kratos. That should be a challenge.

Erverain

Well, the thing on your back is the only thing that throws me off. What is that anyway?
And you are Phaeton's mule, right? Not some erstwhile sibling or clone?

uh... Erstwhile sibling? I know I'm not a clone.  

[PendragonX9]

the red of your outfit really doesn't match the red of the vampire hunter  

[Roland Karloseth]

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

I like it, it all matches well. I like how the sword is melting.

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?

 

[Duke of Balls]

The ice blade doesnt go, and the flame sword doesnt either...
it gives it a tad bit just weird look...
to make it work, add more blue, and something to match the flame.  

[invisible-weirdo]

It's nice but something seems....off about it o.O
I think it's the lack of pants.
Yeah it's probably the lack of pants sweatdrop  

[Roland Karloseth]

Disturbed Masterpiece

The ice blade doesnt go, and the flame sword doesnt either...
it gives it a tad bit just weird look...
to make it work, add more blue, and something to match the flame.

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

My apologies, I keep forgetting to let people know when I'm doing a cosplay This cosplay is Lloyd Irving.

Anyway, Invis. I like it, although the fuzzy things on your head kinda... make me like it a bit less.

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?

 

[Erverain]

Oh Lawd is that Spinal from Killer Instinct? If it is, you got pretty close. The helmet and sword are the only major differences.  

[Roland Karloseth]

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

Well, the placement of the swords have changed, a change for the better in my oppinion.

And no, I'm cosplaying a stalfos right now.

EDIT: Not anymore.

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?

 

[CaucasianNoodles]

Good job. I think that the two lightening bolts might be a bit much. But otherwise. Thats a really good job ^.^  

[Phaeton 2]

Lose the tail, consider a different scarf too. Those aren't the sorts of things you would walk into a prom or some other sort of formal ball with. Crazy how I would know, I avoided every single school event like the plague. I didn't even stay for the rally against the budget cuts.  

[Erverain]

The shoulder-guards don't quite mesh well with the robes. This is probably a fault in layering...  

[Elcia]

You're looking very mature and ready to take care of something important Erverain. I happen to like simple avis very much.  

[Roland Karloseth]

Tell me, exactly what does freedom mean...

Ooh, I likey Elcia. I like the black and blue combo, it works.

To whoever comments on mine, it's a cosplay of Roland Deschain.

...if I'm not free to be as twisted as I want to be?

 

[124-C]

I guess I really can't critique it very well, but didn't the character carry more of a revolver?