Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[CR Kyrie]

My first thought was that the hair doesn't match =)

But that's my only complaint =D  

[Erverain]

The pants are the problem. They seem a bit out of place. Go pantsless!  

[CR Kyrie]

My only problem is the flower, and that's only a problem because the rules of the thread state that I need a problem =)

Also, I'm currently in the business of finding pants that would fit =) these are the best thus far, because I'm not a fan of the tights/short-pants combination.  

[Large Inmate]

The mask. It just doesn't go with the cape but the cape works with everything else in an odd way. Although I think it needs a mask... just not that one.  

[124-C]

The earrings don't really fit with the rest of the avatar... and I'm not really digging the spider tat...

-Tsuji  

[Reiku Alche]

My only issue would be the pants. confused The stake kinda makes them not as out there, but I still would say it needs new pants XP  

[Large Inmate]

The magic stick ... [aka Light Saber] just doesn't fit. It's a dark themed avatar and the red just jumps out in a bad way. Not sure if the blue would do better or not...  

[Reiku Alche]

It looks almost snake-like to me >3> Just because of the pointy teeth and cig (Not necessarily a bad thing). Other than that I'm not much of a fan of the spider tattoo =P

((P.S.: Does the Dark Star work better?))  

[Erverain]

Something seems out of place, but I can't put my finger on it...  

[124-C]

Erverain

Something seems out of place, but I can't put my finger on it...

I think it's the interaction between the scarf and the anklets...

The neon stick thing doesn't really work... There's only one avatar that I've ever actually seen it work really well with (which prompted me to buy one and never use it...).

-Tsuji  

[Reiku Alche]

Tsujigiri-san

Erverain

Something seems out of place, but I can't put my finger on it...

I think it's the interaction between the scarf and the anklets...

The neon stick thing doesn't really work... There's only one avatar that I've ever actually seen it work really well with (which prompted me to buy one and never use it...).

-Tsuji

Yes, it probably is the scarf and anklets, now that I look at it. . .

I'm not sure how I feel about it. I don't like the backwards sitting position much and there doesn't appear to be any color scheme (so no errors). The position would be my only complaint, I guess :/  

[CR Kyrie]

I've never been a fan of the scarf (even though it's only been out a few weeks). What you did looks good, but the scarf just messes with it.  

[Erverain]

The pants are still the only problem here. In that position, the katana looks like a sabre biggrin  

[- m a c a r o n i e -]

the anesthetic never set in and i'm wondering where

well it doesn't really
match that well, and i've
always hated that cape thing (sorries)

the apathy and urgency is that i thought i phoned in

 

[CR Kyrie]

Ack, I hate the vampire face ;-; become a human.