Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Roland Karloseth]

Yes he did, I changed it later. I'm bad about that.

Anyway, yours is pretty good, except the only thing bugging me is the pipe.  

[Phaeton 2]

The halo is a little out of place but not bad. It reminds me of something Goll would probably make.  

[CaucasianNoodles]

I like it. it is awsome. *thumbs up*

Pfft. Just because this is a prom dress i dont care about walking into one ^.^ I got it cuz its pretty.

i dont have much gold crying

lol ^.^  

[Kusaragi]

You found some real symmetry there, I like how the Lightning bolts and The Hermes Moon interact. Looks like some ancient Moon/Elemental God. ^_^

Let's try to raise another one ^_^

 

[invisible-weirdo]

You....have no pants sweatdrop

Anyway, I like how the new Pearl EI interacts with the floating cat up there (it really makes it seem like a single item) but that little scene doesn't quite fit with the rest of the outfit (which compliments each other pretty well). And I didn't notice the squirrel at first, but now that I see it, it sorta seems....odd right there =/

But yeah. Hopefully some of that made sense sweatdrop  

[Kusaragi]

I made it seem like just something to draw the eyes in... the squirrel-in-pants was just something that seemed to fit... the Cat-glow-thing could be what made the warrior so good ad keeping the treasure he found. ^_^

I like what you've done with the Hourglass and the Crystal sphere. It really puts you in the moment like your avatar "belongs" there. Well done.

Let's try to raise another one ^_^

 

[invisible-weirdo]

Ah...Now that you've explained it, it does make sense. Kinda like a guardian spirit kind of thing, right?

And thank you ^.^

[Also, to whoever comes after me, you can skip my Avi if you want, since my post here isn't really much of a critique sweatdrop So yeah. Out-of-rotation or not, it's your call.]  

[Hadaka Kyoujin]

Hey listen!

O.e Snowy.......and the mask doesn't really.....fit....and to the one below me....this is the only stuff I could afford that I liked....so.....go easy, the red hair in the white is a good touch though....

O.e *Blam blam blam blam* *Booooom!!!!!* Listen to that....O.e

 

[TeDdY_bEcHiA16]

There r cheap cool stuff, u can buy at marketplace.

 

[Elcia]

Well I'm not a fan of that hair or Gaia's poor old attempts at high heels.

That aside though, your avi does balance out the black/red/gold rather well. I would suggest a darker skull hair pin if you could. Yes, the gray gets pulled in by the badge, but it doesn't stand out against your hair quite like it should to compliment the avi as a whole.  

[Erverain]

It's nearly impossible to make anything decent with the mounts. Well, aside from the chocobo. But seriously, it doesn't add much to the avatar overall.  

[Kusaragi]

I have to ask...

Sledgehammer? stare Is there an obscure reference there I'm unaware of?

Let's try to raise another one ^_^

 

[wakusei]

I wanna be...BUM BAAAAAAAH! ...your sledgehammer!
BUM BAAAAAAAH! Why don't ya just caaaall my name?

Ahem, anywaaaay....

There's a theme here, I can sense it. Not sure what it is, though...although generally I like it. The Auspice doll seems oddly out of place, though.

 

[Kusaragi]

My (Partial) theme was a warrior helped by the Geni-cat... I threw in the squirrel just for kicks. ^_^

And as always Waku... your avatar is uncritiqueable. mrgreen

Let's try to raise another one ^_^