Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[TeDdY_bEcHiA16]

I like the heartbreaker jacket, but better with dark shoes  

[Roland Karloseth]

I'm currently hosting a contest in the ATG clan...

I personally am not a fan of the hair and the phone. Other than that, it's not bad.

...The prize is 5k. Why not swing by and check it out?

 

[Phaeton 2]

Monty Python much? It's a great setup, I just wish Gaia had some decent legplates. That and a good melee weapon. You'd be set. Also, ease off on Occulus mythica. it just makes your eyes look screwy inside the helmet.  

[TeDdY_bEcHiA16]

Well, that´s creepy!!! Too dark 4 my taste..  

[Elcia]

It's alright. Judging from what you just posted you don't like "dark" but the wings have ominous overtones that the rest of your avi doesn't live up to.  

[Erverain]

That thing near your feet doesn't seem to fit. I guess it might just be my own interpretation of things.
And I'm apparently in one of my older get-ups. It feels familiar for some reason.  

[Phaeton]

It looks familiar. It's nice though. Aesthetically, I'd say get a hat that matches your coat instead of your shirt though.  

[Roland Karloseth]

I'm currently hosting a contest in the ATG clan...

AH, a ninja, eh? I like it, no real flaws that I can see.

...The prize is 5k. Why not swing by and check it out?

 

[124-C]

Dude, you're on fire. eek

So... much... fire...  

[Roland Karloseth]

I'm currently hosting a contest in the ATG clan...

Your avi's are always interesting. While the TM is not one of my favorite items, you have pulled it off here. And the little shadow spirit, well I'm kinda used to seeing him there. The only thing I have an issue with for some reason is the claw, It just... doesn't seem to fit to me.

...The prize is 5k. Why not swing by and check it out?

 

[TeDdY_bEcHiA16]

Well, u have fire u r black wit red eyes, there´s a match, but...  

[Erverain]

Well, the elemental wings and the floating rock don't really fit, but other than that, it's okay.  

[TeDdY_bEcHiA16]

I like ur avie. it´s really cool (but I have to criticize u), So I´ll say that "I don´t like ur pants"!!

 

[wakusei]

I'd lose the wing and get blacker pants.

 

[124-C]

There's a problem with your avatar, Waku, but I can't see what it is because there's too much stuff on it...

How the hell do you get the avatars to still work well with all that stuff on them?!