Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[ethereal - - LUNA]

Not bad. The coat doesn't really seem to match though...  

[CR Kyrie]

It's juuuust past the line on the 'clutter scale' that I created in my head.

But it's well put together nonetheless xD  

[ethereal - - LUNA]

*laughs* C-clutter scale? That's hilarious!!!

Niceley done. I don't much like the sword though color wise...  

[Erverain]

My, there's a lot of lens flares there... And critters, too.
But it somehow works for you.  

[ethereal - - LUNA]

Thank you. I like yours, it is a little simple for my tastes but not bad.  

[PendragonX9]

hmm...well it's a bit to cluttered for my taste i'd try to weed out some unnecessary items  

[invisible-weirdo]

Hm....I'm not liking how that particular cape interacts with the mythril armor. It doesn't quite fit. Same goes for the mask >.>

At the moment it's looking like two avi themes were smooshed together >.>  

[Erverain]

She says this when she basically has a Predator mask on her face while everything (sans Mr. Bloody the Cleaver) else seems rather normal. Split personality, maybe?
And yes, I did name your machete. And no, you can't change it.  

[Roland Karloseth]

I'm currently hosting a contest in the ATG clan...

Hrm, I like this one Erve. A bit simple, perhaps, but it is pleasing to the eyes.

This one, it is yet another cosplay. This one happens to be Albert Wesker.

...The prize is 5k. Why not swing by and check it out?

 

[invisible-weirdo]

...It was my superhero avi >.>
XD Mr. Bloody the Cleaver...Love it.

Anyway. Hoshit, it's Erv O.O
I didn't notice it was you right away what with the hair change and all >.>
Anyway, I like it. Simple, yeah, but it looks good. 3nodding

Damn >.< I didn't type fast enough >.>
Anyway, like I've said before, it's a kick a** Wesker cosplay. I can't really think of anything to add or change...  

[Erverain]

And now you are a masked magician type person. Perhaps a dress of some kind, or the actual tux might have made it flow a tad better. But then again, those are expensive...  

[invisible-weirdo]

Indeed they are -_-
I changed up my avi a bit. Is this a little better?

And as for your critique uh....Look up? =P  

[Erverain]

Hmm, yep. The black-and-white combination with a splash of red here-and-there certainly works in this case.  

[PendragonX9]

hmm...well...nope, i can't find anything at all wrong with it its just to well done  

[0-0Chaos Control0-0]

I like it, it's nice. It looks like a holy knight and his companion dragon xd

Anyway, to whoever comments after me. Yes, it's me Roland. This is my mule for female cosplays, this one is Saria from The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time.