Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Large Inmate]

lol you're a vampire to.

I gotta say the pants. American meets Japanese didn't work so well.  

[Ellshiz]

I think the hair should be changed. Maybe to a red or gold or something to tie some of the bright colours in more.  

[CR Kyrie]

You just need to pick a theme. I'm sure that the innocent dress and demented face/book combo was supposed to be clever, but it really didn't work ^^;  

[- m a c a r o n i e -]

the anesthetic never set in and i'm wondering where

i don't think your shirt or hair
matches the rest very well

the apathy and urgency is that i thought i phoned in

 

[CR Kyrie]

I still don't like the vampire face. I think the eyes aren't expressive enough, and the face is uniform for everyone.  

[Arcanas]

I don't really like that hair style much. Course, I'm not much of a fan of long hair styles like that anyway....something about the length of it. The hat also...I'm assuming you're going for a pirate look? Well, that's what it looks like to me...and I don't think the hat goes well.

On a good side though, I love the look of the Katana you achieved, it looks so much more like a sword a pirate would use, rather than the regular Katana.  

[Kire Kaysan]

It is a good avatar, except those gloves don't work. The layering is messing them up.  

[CR Kyrie]

The shirt/pants combo would be my major critique here. They don't work with the rest of the avatar.  

[Arcanas]

As I've said before, I'm not a fan of the gills...not one of my favorite items. But personal pet peeves aside, the avatar is awesome, with the snowman giving it huge points, the gills taking away a negligible amount.  

[CR Kyrie]

The hair doesn't match the rest of the avatar's color scheme at all.  

[Arcanas]

As much as the avatar matches, the addition of the skin makes it blend into itself too much  

[CR Kyrie]

My main complaint still has to be the hair =P it just looks too anime for the avatar it sits on.  

[Trish the Stalker]

The mask doesn't quite match everything else and the yellow in the hat kind of makes it seem a little too mismatched.  

[Large Inmate]

Hm...
I think the top doesn't go, although I think it's more of the flowers covering up the top and having nothing to really tie them too.  

[Kire Kaysan]

The paper ears don't work well with the hair.