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 Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:35 am
All the pieces, falling, shatter
Too sharp to put back together
Too small to matter.
That's been my MSN name a few times for a couple of years now, I came up with it before the new Evanescence album came out with similar lyrics. I felt kinda ripped off when that happened...
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:39 am
When I was little I always thought the word "Zork" was mine. Only to fine out, years later, it was already the name of a game. xp
At least you got to it first, La Belle. sweatdrop Zork's not even a wooooooord! gonk
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:44 am
EienKage When I was little I always thought the word "Zork" was mine. Only to fine out, years later, it was already the name of a game. xp At least you got to it first, La Belle. sweatdrop Zork's not even a wooooooord! gonk That's so sad sad I have lots of poetry and writing stuff, its on my writing account for dA, http://la-belle-isolde.deviantart.com if anyone wants to take a look.
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 10:33 pm
New poem! (Bogeyman)
@Eien: Thanks for the feedback! 4laugh It is much appreciated.
@Belle: Eheheh. I can sympathize. I thought I was being all unique with my concept on Death while I was writing a short story, and then I read Terry Pratchett.
gonk So many similarities, except his writing is infinitely better than mine.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:12 am
I like the Bogeyman style.
“Before you eat me, Bogeyman,”
I said while hanging limp,
“I have to ask, why children?
Why not cows, or shrimp?
The last line threw me off at first, it took me more than several attempts to read it right.
>.<
But anyway, good shizzle, fun to read and an easy tempo.
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:57 am
Toldja I'd write something new, Josh.
.......Heart-bleedy as it is. sweatdrop Eheheheh.
And to remark on your last comment:
Thanks for the input! whee And I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:29 pm
I have a song that I started but haven't finished yet. It's about my grandfather.. long story short, he's not the greatest man to be around..
Forgive me if it's nto very good.. I had quit writing for over a year before a friend got me back into it
(Doesn't have a title yet)
They say families stick together but it's just a luxury
So please stop giving me false hope
For a man who'll always smile and tell me I look pretty
Instead of making me feel all alone
Maybe it's the wine and maybe it's his pills
Maybe that's just the way he is
An ex-soldier from the 50's and not quite the mentality
For helping raise a happy little kid
But I'm not so little anymore
Chorus:
And it's bullshit! I can't stand it!
When you act like I'm out of my mind
It's my choice! You're so damned
Chauvenistic all the time
So maybe I am not "the boy"
And maybe I seem strange
I'm also not the target
For your drunken rage
So, yeah, all I have is a long verse and a chorus.. it's still very rough around the edges but let me know what you think.. I really hope to get the passion across..
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:12 pm
I'll get to reading your's Erica De America.
As for you IdomuNiYume, I'm adding you. As for what you have, it feels like a sad tale to me.
I can't wait til it's finished, and you know what else would kick butt? IF you recording yourself singing it.
>.>
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:16 pm
All praise Erica's resurrection abilities and her knack for making "AWWWWWWWWWWW THAT'S SO CUUUUUTE!!!!" poems. biggrin
Also, I'm updating the poll.
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:26 pm
Ten pages. I dug through ten pages before I could snatch this thread back up. xd
And I do my best, I spose. sweatdrop I thought this would be a nice break from the earlier and relatively "emo-esque" pieces I put up.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:36 pm
And what other gems are you hoarding away from this guild eh?
>.>
What other pieces of your soul are you not bearing to your guildmates? Show us!!
I think I will make a quickie tonight. ^_^
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:22 am
Jaft I'll get to reading your's Erica De America. As for you IdomuNiYume, I'm adding you. As for what you have, it feels like a sad tale to me. I can't wait til it's finished, and you know what else would kick butt? IF you recording yourself singing it. >.> Thanks smile It is kind of sad but it's more anger that I'm trying to get out.. As for the recording, that's what I plan to do. I have some friends teaching me guitar and after I have a basic tune on the guitar that I can out the (hopefully finished by then) lyrics to then I'll be recording it. I haven't written ANYTHING in over a year so I'm excited and I'm so glad you like it smile
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:45 pm
I'll also be working on some poems and possibly stories.. I've wanted to anyways so I'll do it for you guys smile heart blaugh
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:53 pm
Good, good. I'll do some poetry later tonight if I don't fall asleep.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:11 am
I really enjoyed Random Thoughts of a Sane Madman! whee Written with a wit, humor, and surreptitious sense of pattern.
Well done, Josh. You deserve a pat on your overalled back. xd
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