Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Sentama Lin]

Oh! That's quite elegant-looking, at least for the top. I'm not fond of the grass skirt, but that's because I can't see any other greens to complement it. (says the guy who is colour deficient)  

[Spifflicious]

You've had the nurse thing going for a little while now, Lin. I think it suits you, but I don't see any sort of... cohesion with your avatar. sweatdrop xd  

[Elcia]

Pisces you avi looks like the sum total of all horror films (relatively speaking) put together. I like it though I'm not sure about the puddle. I suppose if it was blood then the avi would be beyond perfect!.  

[Tentacle Raep]

I love how everything ties up nicely. You really did the elven look well.

 

[Sentama Lin]

Oh my... it REALLY is Tentacle Raep. The only thing that I can critique is that the entire concept of the avatar is extremely creepy.  

[PendragonX9]

well it kinda lacks a theme you have the nurse hat, and the green stuff... i just cant see how it all fits together  

[124-C]

It's good, it really is, but I think it'd be better with the Ominous Smoke from Carol of 'ol Nick.

Otherwise just cut the Vampire Hunter out of it, cause that really is throwing off the rest of the avatar. I also think it'd be cool with a Shadow Spirit.  

[Sentama Lin]

I can't really comment on a Tsuj classic, Tsuj. That said, it makes me wish more that some of the blacks weren't so purple-ish.

Weird... Lack of coherence? Oh well, not that the items really go together that well anyways. *was going for like fantasy cleric/healer type thing, in a style similar to Lyonesse from Brigandine, but in White*  

[invisible-weirdo]

*googles Lyonesse*
Huh. Well, it seems that you got pretty close to the overall look in my opinion. But like a lot of the others have said, I just don't see how the items themselves go together. They somehow work though.

[/foambabbledie]  

[Erverain]

Very natural. Except perhaps for the self-immolating turtle.  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

I still really like it, though I wish the face was visible... Are glasses a theme for you, Erv?  

[Sentama Lin]

It's ominous. The only thing that bothers me are the eyes; they're very distracting.  

[Erverain]

The head bits might throw it a little. The rest seems to be on an oriental theme.

And they very well might be, Steph. It's probably an unconscious thing.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Erv looks ready to kick a** =D
All in all, it's really good. Even the little plasma beam, which quite frankly isn't my favorite item in all of Gaia >.>, looks pretty good along with the rest of the outfit. So good job 3nodding *thumbs up*  

[Spifflicious]

Invis, you have a nice flow to your avatar, as per the norm. I like the greens and the skirt. x3 *two-thumbs-up*