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 Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:57 pm
EggaxSponge Tell me what you think! My friend leah is demanding to read it too so soon i will have lots of feedback heart yay
The only real thing I found wrong with it was that you over punctuate. I have a hard time with that too, since I get so used to talking and not writing and have to make an effort not to abuse the semi colon or whatever...
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:00 pm
chianachan EggaxSponge Tell me what you think! My friend leah is demanding to read it too so soon i will have lots of feedback heart yay
The only real thing I found wrong with it was that you over punctuate. I have a hard time with that too, since I get so used to talking and not writing and have to make an effort not to abuse the semi colon or whatever... Thanks. Egga likes puntuation! I really don't have time to do it right, the ideas pour out of my fingers and into the keyboard, so I save that for editing xd
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:01 pm
Looks like Ketake left, again. v.v
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:05 pm
EggaxSponge chianachan EggaxSponge Tell me what you think! My friend leah is demanding to read it too so soon i will have lots of feedback heart yay
The only real thing I found wrong with it was that you over punctuate. I have a hard time with that too, since I get so used to talking and not writing and have to make an effort not to abuse the semi colon or whatever... Thanks. Egga likes puntuation! I really don't have time to do it right, the ideas pour out of my fingers and into the keyboard, so I save that for editing xd
Edit: My friend says you should write car explosions in to atract a male audience xd
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:32 pm
TheBlueWarrior Looks like Ketake left, again. v.v http://www.geekologie.com/2007/06/the_abduction_lamp.php
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:38 pm
Ketake 2.0 TheBlueWarrior Looks like Ketake left, again. v.v http://www.geekologie.com/2007/06/the_abduction_lamp.php There is some funky stuff there. o.o
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:40 pm
TheBlueWarrior Ketake 2.0 TheBlueWarrior Looks like Ketake left, again. v.v http://www.geekologie.com/2007/06/the_abduction_lamp.php There is some funky stuff there. o.o Do want!
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:41 pm
Ketake 2.0 TheBlueWarrior Ketake 2.0 TheBlueWarrior Looks like Ketake left, again. v.v http://www.geekologie.com/2007/06/the_abduction_lamp.php There is some funky stuff there. o.o Do want! I want that Lamp too. Tis funny looking.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:47 pm
Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:50 pm
Ketake 2.0 Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk o.o Uh oh, this is going to be bad...
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:53 pm
Ketake 2.0 Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk It´s spelled /B/tard whee
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:53 pm
Ketake 2.0 Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk slap him XD
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:54 pm
Thanatos Phoenix Ketake 2.0 Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk It´s spelled /B/tard whee Do not care*slaps*
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:55 pm
This is going to get worse before it gets better.
Don't egg her on Squee, you'll get us all killed!
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:55 pm
Ketake 2.0 Thanatos Phoenix Ketake 2.0 Thanatos calls me a b-tard gonk It´s spelled /B/tard whee Do not care*slaps* *cries*.... crying *runs away*
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