Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[xDarkPisces]

I like the overall flow of the dark colors. Nicely done. I always feel like my avatars are missing something, and the same is true about yours... I'm not sure what it is. Maybe Kusa's ever-elusive "Pop" item?  

[invisible-weirdo]

D:
Is....is that....ohmygod...a Pico Urn???
TT.TT

*finishes freaking out*
Ok um....It's pretty good. Though yeah it seems like it's missing something. I'd suggest something around the lower half of the body since the unobstructed white of the pants sorta seems like a little void of nothing at the moment...

EDIT:lol I'll have you know that right after I wrote this I went straight to the marketplace and spent about half an hour raising the extra 15k I needed to get my own Pico Urn (I sold some stuff...my inner packrat cried >.>).  

[Kire Kaysan]

It's very good Invis. It is a great combinations of gold and white.

I can't think of anything that needs improvement.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

((side note not included. What do you mean by Kusa's "Pop" item?))  

[Erverain]

((Thinking perhaps he mixed the two together by mistake...))
Not bad. But you could use a good hat of some kind.  

[ethereal - - LUNA]

It's decent, but doesn't really stick out to me as amazing.  

[Elcia]

Not flashy but Erv's has that simple elegance, but I guess that is my taste.

Yours is an odd combination. The shades don't quite match as well as they could but that is gaia's fault for giving everything its own palette ><  

[Roland Karloseth]

Ooh, Good one Elcia. I like it.

Also, new cosplay. Dark Samus.  

[Kusaragi]

I think you did a good job, the Deathwhisper spikes really set the shoulders off nicely.

As for this one I'm looking for maybe a different pair of shoes to go with it. Also Still looking for something (I don't know what) for the fire elemental.

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[Roland Karloseth]

I might suggest the onyx gravity shoes, like the ones I'm wearing. Keep in mind though, layering on these shoes is weird and most pants go over them. also, the fire elemental... maybe it needs a weapon? Here's what I could come up with

 

[ethereal - - LUNA]

It's decent, I like it. Maybe a few more items to make it pop?

Yeah, I know all of the greens on mine don't exactly match but it works out, I suppose.  

[Elcia]

My previous comment still applies but you know what might help, the munk sandals they have a "grassy-er" feel and the frog prince crown is silver as opposed to all the gold you are wearing.


Thanks Rol, I'm adding variations of that one to my list of repeatable avi's, granted I'm able to borrow the Yama.  

[Kusaragi]

Wow. I'm speechless. This is not the Elcia I'm used to, the dark clothing and light hair and eyes really grabs my attention and does not let go. I'm not sure if I would change anything for yours.

As for the elemental I think I can use the Nano-C pose (Bang Headshot) And make this one a Zombie spoof avatar. I'll tweek with it a little more because would then have to alter some other things in/out.

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[Kire Kaysan]

It is good Kusa, but the skin stands out a bit much. The skin looks odd in my opinion with the avi  

[Elcia]

Elci's in a cosplay type mode at the moment (verses her elf-eared, curly black mane self) And I want to be as creative as possible so I'm trying to push the items I have available to me to the limit.

Kire its quite odd. I like it though there is something.... you seem a little top heavy. Its too bad there is no shadowing or horizon line option we could add to our avis I think you'd look less out of place