Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kusaragi]

Could say the same about your little buddy. xd I used him because he's not a Cash Item (one of my limits). I think that you could frame the face better with the Demonic Anklets mask, but other then that I like where you've taken it. ^_^  

[Roland Karloseth]

A bit colorful maybe, but good nonetheless. I like it 3nodding  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Except for the eyes, I like it. You need some more red somewhere else to pull off the eyes. The black, white, and gold theme works well.  

[xDarkPisces]

It's a good start. The blues and whites compliment each other well. Now just see if you can't add a bit of detail to it. Maybe look into a few white accessories, small ones now, that can offset the blue expanse of your dress. You have a nice bit going there. Just try and elaborate on it. smile  

[Erverain]

Very menacing look you have there. Everything goes together nicely, and I can't contain my want of that most excellent jacket. It's designed so well...  

[124-C]

I don't like that coat. The vest and shirt imply a certain sleekness to the look, but then the coat appears overly baggy and looks wrong...  

[Elcia]

My only complaint is the the blue in the dogie's scarf. Other than that I'm loving the rugged but armed and dangerous in a pinch traveler theme.
Have you looked into the brown musketeer top or is it too weird a shade of brown?  

[124-C]

I love it, Elcia. I actually think that shotgun/pitchfork is wonderful addition to the avatar in an absurd way. lol If I were to pick at it, though, and I will for the sake of the thread, I would consider a different pose for the weapon. The one that you've chosen is a little awkward. I can't help but feel that a slack-armed pose would be a little more natural.

I looked into the Brown Musketeer Top, but I didn't use it for two reasons:

1. I wanted to keep the black well balanced in the avatar.
   
2. I have a black top and don't have the gold readily available for a brown one.

I was a bit concerned about the dog's scarf and am I wishing I had gotten Kinzie (the one with the red scarf) instead... Anyway, I'm convinced that the dog's presence is more of a boon that the scarf is a detriment.

For your consideration:

 

[Erverain]

I dunno about the gloves. I'm sure you put a lot of thought into it, but those gloves just seem a bit off...  

[invisible-weirdo]

Very well done, Erv. The only semi-complaint I can make is that the hat itself is a little too warm when compared to the rest of what you're actually wearing, but it balances the chainsaw, so really, I wouldn't change anything.

*Thumbs up*  

[Roland Karloseth]

Better fear me, better run away

Hrm... Interesting. The turtle is a bit out of place, but... I know that's not leaving xd It's a good one though.

'Cause this battle's just begun.

 

[Taeryyn]

The only thing I can suggest would be a slightly darker shade of blond hair, since it sort of fades into your skin and the wings. But other than that, it's great. : 3  

[xDarkPisces]

Wow, Tae, once again you've displayed a knack for color coordination. x3 I like the purple/maroon/magenta flow you've got going there. Definitely dark and rouge-y. It's reminds me of a bruise I had once. xd Good job. 8.5/10.  

[invisible-weirdo]

EDIT: Dammit, I have to learn to stop leaving the computer in the middle of my typing...

Ok, um....Pisces...I really like the look. Wonderful mix of reds and blacks in a profoundly ebil way 3nodding My only complaint is perhaps the hair. The brilliant white makes it sorta stand out a little much, but I'm not sure what you should change it too. Black hair would make it sorta disappear into the black of the hat and fog....Up to you.

Roland: Atta boy XP You're learning!  

[xDarkPisces]

Invis: I would definitely change the hair if this hairdo hadn't cost me 3,100 gold. X3 I'm not rolling in gold anymore, so I have to be more frugal. I sort of like the contrast too, or I'd use one of my hair-changing poses. I hate that you can't save haircuts though... You just have to keep pouring gold into the salon. -_-

I like yours overall, by the way. Nothing much to change. The turtle is a part of your avatar now, so it doesn't seem to stick out for me. It's like Sanzo's fox ears. They're just always there. 3nodding