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 Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:45 pm
MrJimmy All well and good, if Eien, or anyone else wants to give it a go, I have part one of chapter one here for download: http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd4/64364/Muffin.rtfIf you have questiions as to how to transcribe it as a visual, I'm open to explain my personal vision on anything and everything. I think that the one thing that I wanted to stress the most is that I wanted my charactor in his squid form to be truly monsterous. Like huge, huge. And huge, huge is what. . . 15' tall? 150' tall?
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:45 pm
MrJimmy I think that the one thing that I wanted to stress the most is that I wanted my charactor in his squid form to be truly monsterous. Like huge, huge. Jimmy.... you worry me sometimes... really you truly do *just shakes head*
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:47 pm
MrJimmy All well and good, if Eien, or anyone else wants to give it a go, I have part one of chapter one here for download: http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd4/64364/Muffin.rtfIf you have questiions as to how to transcribe it as a visual, I'm open to explain my personal vision on anything and everything. I think that the one thing that I wanted to stress the most is that I wanted my charactor in his squid form to be truly monsterous. Like huge, huge.
But... at the same time you appear normal-sized while in the human-suit?
Is this another one of your amazing talents, Jimmy?
(And about the file- my internet browser is not liking that link. It doesn't seem to work.)
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:50 pm
I like it Jimmy. How many pages were you envisioning?
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:51 pm
Sanzoskitsune MrJimmy I think that the one thing that I wanted to stress the most is that I wanted my charactor in his squid form to be truly monsterous. Like huge, huge. Jimmy.... you worry me sometimes... really you truly do *just shakes head* It's just a quirk of my charactor, because when he's in his human costume, he looks regular sized. this makes him dangerous, because when he's thretened he'll pop out of the human suit and everything will be forced away by his girth. I don't think I have a set size, when i think of his though, "daunting" is a good word to describe it. "Grandiose" works too. That's an amazing version of the Slim comic Eien... lol
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:52 pm
EienKage I like it Jimmy. How many pages were you envisioning? Ohh, let's see, I'll have to go over it and map it out in my head, gimmi a sec.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:55 pm
MrJimmy Sanzoskitsune MrJimmy I think that the one thing that I wanted to stress the most is that I wanted my charactor in his squid form to be truly monsterous. Like huge, huge. Jimmy.... you worry me sometimes... really you truly do *just shakes head* It's just a quirk of my charactor, because when he's in his human costume, he looks regular sized. this makes him dangerous, because when he's thretened he'll pop out of the human suit and everything will be forced away by his girth. I don't think I have a set size, when i think of his though, "daunting" is a good word to describe it. "Grandiose" works too. That's an amazing version of the Slim comic Eien... lol Hmm... makes me wonder if my character has any quirks.... sweatdrop I can't think of any she would have.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:56 pm
Does this mean we have a story arc!?
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:01 pm
MrJimmy I don't think I have a set size, when i think of his though, "daunting" is a good word to describe it. "Grandiose" works too. Just remember, if your tentacles are three feet in diameter you can only rape giants and elephants. There really is such a thing as "too big". wink
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:05 pm
Shadow... you've never seen tentacle Porn, have you? gonk
EDIT: MrJimmy; I was thinking, after your part, we could segue into some exposition about the characters and the place he lives, and a bit about how it is. He could have recently moved there, which would be a good start, I think.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:06 pm
Shadow-Savant MrJimmy I don't think I have a set size, when i think of his though, "daunting" is a good word to describe it. "Grandiose" works too. Just remember, if your tentacles are three feet in diameter you can only rape giants and elephants. There really is such a thing as "too big". wink ... gonk do you have ANY idea the images you just put into my head? I need a happy place now...
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:07 pm
K0m0d0 Does this mean we have a story arc!? Technically yes, we would be making one shots without one. Your charactor has a lot of her own quirks Sanz. I see her as wavering, kind of like what Jimmy does, between what she's become and what she used to be. Trying to balance the motherly instinct with her days of being a roaming heroine. Where as Jimmy is trying to balance his monster-like tendancies with his need to fulfill the role of a father. I see Sanzo as sort of having trouble with accepting who she's become, and regreting stepping into this new world, where as Jimmy simply can't grasp what a human father is supposed to act like, he get's a lot of his ideas from what he sees on human TV (hence the swetter vest and pipe rofl ).
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:10 pm
MrJimmy K0m0d0 Does this mean we have a story arc!? Technically yes, we would be making one shots without one. Your charactor has a lot of her own quirks Sanz. I see her as wavering, kind of like what Jimmy does, between what she's become and what she used to be. Trying to balance the motherly instinct with her days of being a roaming heroine. Where as Jimmy is trying to balance his monster-like tendancies with his need to fulfill the role of a father. I see Sanzo as sort of having trouble with accepting who she's become, and regreting stepping into this new world, where as Jimmy simply can't grasp what a human father is supposed to act like, he get's a lot of his ideas from what he sees on human TV (hence the swetter vest and pipe rofl ). Oooh I like that! Makes her seem all cool and kickbutt, which has my seal of approval ^_^ and... yeah that whole sweater vest and pipe thing makes me crack up LOL.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:12 pm
EienKage Shadow... you've never seen tentacle Porn, have you? gonk EDIT: MrJimmy; I was thinking, after your part, we could segue into some exposition about the characters and the place he lives, and a bit about how it is. He could have recently moved there, which would be a good start, I think. Nope. Not once in my life. Do they somehow make 3' thick tentacles believable? confused
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