Sakura's Poetry Contest!

[Cpt. Magrice]

Eh I might as well give this a try.

The jump.

Flashing lights down below
A nervous person from above
People yelling
hes not listening
they thought they are losing him
the jump.

 

[Lysine]

Here today, gone tommarrow.
All the flowers
Like to borrow
Chocolate for hours and hours.
~ chilecavy~guineapig .

ok, not very good, but, oh well.... rolleyes . ninja . rofl . 4laugh .
~ chilecavy~guineapig
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{v v}

~` chilecavy guineapig .

mrgreen .

~` chilecavy~guineapig .s.  

[Lysine]

Lightining and thunder
crashes down beloW I watch
from the clouds all day.

~ chilecavy~` guineapig.

oh, and ^THAT ^
Was a haiku.
3nodding 4laugh 3nodding 4laugh .
ninja ninja ninja ninja ninja ninja ninja ninja ninja .  

[Saiyumei]

Everyone is so good eek Mines doesnt even rhyme sweatdrop gonk  

[Aki-Kawaii]

My heart
My heart
It's been crashed
it's been smashed
it's been shattered
You helped me glue it back together
it turns out you were holding it together
I thought you were there
I thought you cared
My porcelain heart has been shattered
hopefully for the last time
there are no tears left for me to cry
none left.....

No word can describe
There is a fire that burns inside of me
It burns just for you.
You have thawed my heart of ice
And freed me from my flaws
With you I feel as free as a bird
The flame burns with passion
Your smile keeps me alive
I adore you with.......
Every fiber of my being
Yet there are only a few words I....
feel free enough to say
I love you

despair
There once was a girl
with long raven hair
her eyes were so cold
and full of despair
she felt as if her strings were
being pulled
left and right
through the day and night
Finally when she could bear no more
she threw herself into the raging sea
and there her sad song lives

My alter ego.....
Across a seas of roses....
I look into your deep dare eyes
they're so cold and cruel
I spread my wings and fly away
but your cold stare pierces me again
like an arrow in the heart
I fall
this time into a sea of thorns
I hear your aproach
I spread my wings and fly away again
but I will never be able to escape you
for you are my alter ego

All of these poems go together in some way lol I wrote all of them they are all in my journal.

Just a note all of theese poems describe me and my feelings lol I know I'm a very depressing person, lol NOT!  

[Aki-Kawaii]

I hope ya'll like my poetry I did my best, it's all I can say. biggrin  

[zero_the_wanderer]

nice poetry.  

[Aki-Kawaii]

thanks.  

[Sakura-Kyoukan]

wow lots and lots of poetry! i need to update the notables... hopefully i can get to that today.  

[AfroGuitarist]

u will never no my name not now not ever nsoiuhsagpiusrhgoupgoiug  

[Ravagraid]

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[samara11]

I'm going to write this as I go, random yeah!

The Broken Heart's Lulliby.


A heart is broken,
Words unspoken.

Torn apart,
From the start.

Love is gone,
Not the one.

Just a friend,
In the end.

Not good enough,
Just a bluff.

Got what was wanted,
Heart was taunted.

Never forgiven,
Just keep on livin'.

~FIN~  

[Metalic_Noodles]

It's not great and I don't have a title but here goes...


Fallen, loss of will
no longer able to disagree,
no longer able to voice, [opinions]
no longer shall defeat be felt
as defeat is felt as a norm
victory no longer exsits.
The ones who brake souls fall into an eternal victory
because there is no gray, it is told, there is only victory and loss
Defeat then claimed by the broken,
Victory is then stolen by the evil,
the evil that brakes, brakes fellow creatures
letting them fall at thier [the evil's] feet
not even ofering a helping hand to allow them to rise once more.
To be broken...
To brake...
A cycle of generations, a cycle of humans.  

[`Paintbrush]

WARNING: if you are a serious fan of edger allen poe ... you have been warned.

Noise

Bark! said the dog as the man entered the house who stepped on the cat's and let out a shreik. There were bills on the table but he didn't bother to peek. His son was playing vidieo games that could be herd all over the neighberhood and the man wished it was quiet like way it should. His daughter was talking on the phone, 1 hour, 2 hour, 3 hours of chat. He went to his chair where he sat. He tried and tried to ignore the niose and comotion but the nioses ran through his mind just like a locomotion. The wort part of it all was that blasted parrot he never shutup. The man went to his kitchen and put tea in his cup. With all the niose he dropped his tea. He was so angry he jammed his knee. That was it the man raised his fist, all this niose was making him pisted. He stormed in the dinning room with loads of rage. he went to the parot and shook his cage the man said "when will you shutup!" and the parrot just replied ... "never more". tha man stared at the parot with a twisted stare he thought i'll kill him no niose, There! He went to the kitcken and got a knife he was angry and full of strife. But when he got back to the cage there were the children standing in front the cage and all of a sudden the man lost his rage. He explained that he was still mourning over the death of his wife and wished for a less niosiy life. So he gave them a hug that was warm and nice a said "Hey let's go for some frozen ice"
So ends our poem that was rather well about how a little niose can drive a man to hell  

[[.-.N.o.b.o.d.y.-.]]

Running Emotions

Alas I break,
making my emotions flow,
not knowing what to do.

I wait for them to pass,
even though they wont let me be,
I try to think that there's a escape.

They keep coming back,
I'm not able to hold,
the running emotions that I can't control.