Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[invisible-weirdo]

It'd definitely be better without the Cape thing. And I'm a little iffy about the mask, but that's just because I'm not particularly fond of that item. In terms of color, it actually goes fairly well with the whole outfit.  

[blue0212]

Your overall outfit looks good. the mask doesn't fit this time around and what the heck is that flaming bug!?  

[Elcia]

Tis Lemmy her Flaming Turtle.

For yours I would go without the baseball or maybe without the mask and background items. Only on the grounds of theme, because color scheme wise your avi balances well.  

[blue0212]

I like the theme. Kinda lone wanderer-ish  

[Taeryyn]

As far as your avatar goes, I like the look you've started. I don't think the background fits at all. If you're going to leave the baseball and birds, try to incorporate some white accessories, maybe around your head to balance things out.  

[124-C]

The front of the Gothic Veil's corset and the loincloth look a bit off, but other than that it's pretty epic.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Epic bug mutant monster thing~
You look like you'd slaughter me and then eat me gonk
Very awesome though 3nodding  

[Elcia]

It's soo sweet! I'm actually impressed that you made that cloak look good. And using the contacts to pull in your red hair and Lemmy was a great idea.
It's just odd to see you without the Zorro mask.  

[Red Glacier]

the goggles are kind of random but the avis eyes accomplish the "I want you to die" look XD  

[pickle relish]

I like it. The huge cross on the back is a little odd, but the colors match, and it all fits together nicely. ^^  

[Taeryyn]

It's...very, very green. o_O It matches very well. I really have no negative criticisms. ^_^ You could try adding more intricacy by adding another colour, maybe red to match the accents on the gwee.  

[Elcia]

I love the outfit but I'm thinking the sparkly skin isn't tying in the flowers the way you want it too. I sorts draws the eye to you rather blue shoulder.  

[Kire Kaysan]

It looks very good Elcia. Everything fits together well. I don't see anything that needs to be changed.  

[124-C]

Oh my god! You made the Year One items work! eek  

[Taeryyn]

It makes me grin. : 3 You look very, very mischievous. I'm not sure if that's what you're going for, but the teeth+animals bits+pose+weapons...

You look like you're up to no good, in a comical way. x3 If you could find a different colour bottle to hold, it would be super-duper, since it really stands out, but at the same time it took me a second to figure out what it was.