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 Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:47 pm
For shizzle, homles. xd
And now I'm totally going to stop talking like that, because it almost makes me feel as dirty as typing 1337speak. gonk
Glad you approve, Jimmy! I can't think of any way to do the awkward silence but a chibi scene. Any suggestions? sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:50 pm
Sanzoskitsune Undakai Sanzoskitsune Undakai I vote Sanzo be involved in the tenticle rape scene! (wait...thats almost a given with the flash back on how Muffin came to be >.>) Undakai... how would you like your death to be? Quick and painful or slow and EXTREMELY painful? And with what weapon? I always imagined a quick death in a firey ball of fire high above the earth 3nodding ...not painful enough actually, burning to death, in my mind, is probably one of the 2 most painful deaths I can think of (besides the torturous ones that happen only in my mind...)...next to starvation.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:52 pm
Undakai That was my guess too...are we all in California here? @_@ I'm in Oregon. I know Komo is east coast, although i can't remember which state.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:57 pm
EienKage Glad you approve, Jimmy! I can't think of any way to do the awkward silence but a chibi scene. Any suggestions? sweatdrop I only wish I could think of something as good as you're making it Eien. Visual art is not my forte, I can only oraly tell you what I think it should be, and either way you'd be getting the same thing as a script out of me, because it's the internet... sweatdrop I really like the way you have it going. But remember I'm not an expert, I have no rights to be butting in at the is point because iof my inexperience. But at the same time I want to accomidate Komo's plea for use of empty space. I'm already racking my brain here, I'll make sure to pipe up if I come up with anything.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:58 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:10 pm
Question! Jimmy, what would you say your facial expression would be when you said, "Yes yes, 'fox girl'."?
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:22 pm
EienKage Question! Jimmy, what would you say your facial expression would be when you said, "Yes yes, 'fox girl'."? Kind of "shrugging it off" or agreeing without really listining. Facial expression though... maybe like a look of thought, with eyes pointed up at his forehead like you do when you're thinking, and since we can't get off the theme of the big toothy grin, just the grin turned upside down will do for the mouth.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:27 pm
I have him with a kind of ¬___¬ look. sweatdrop I could upload the file like that, and see if it's alright with you.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:33 pm
Whatever you think is best. It's not like it's the final version anyway, still plenty of time to change it if we want.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:36 pm
Very true. 3nodding So, Page 6, the final page!
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:42 pm
Lawd! You wraped it up in six pages flat! Awesome job Eien! Mut, Komo and the rest will have to give them a glance to see if anything drastic might need to be changed.
But I commend you on doing it in one night where Yoko would still be thinking about doing it in a week's time...
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:49 pm
That's me on hyper-procrastinate mode, which is most of the time. xd I'm only really fast when something's got a flare for me... but, hey, if you can take advantage of my gung-ho, why not, eh? I'll post all the pages now that they're done; CHAPTER 1 Preliminary layout sketchesPage 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 5:11 pm
I approve of most of the layouts...the only one I had a problem with was number 3 ^^;
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 5:23 pm
Well, you know... we could combine pages 2 and 3, and then take the entrance splash and put it on page 1. surprised
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 5:42 pm
MrJimmy Undakai That was my guess too...are we all in California here? @_@ I'm in Oregon. I know Komo is east coast, although i can't remember which state.
I lke those sketches, Eien. The only thing I would do would be to take the part where Jimmy's takling to himself, and make it it's own panal, complete wth chibi style drawings to make room for the dialouge bubbles. 3nodding It's really quite nice, though.
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