Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kire Kaysan]

It's a great combination of teal and maroon. Great use of the clutch items.
I feel like you need something on your face,maybe a tattoo or different eyes. Other than that great job.  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

The only thing I question is the hairstyle. It seems awfully flyaway for the rest of the avatar. It doesn't look bad, though, just a tad out-of-place. otherwise, you are the picture of class and taste. biggrin  

[pickle relish]

You're all glitter and stardust! The eyes don't really seem to blend, but other than that it's great!  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

Thanks. I wanted to look kind of like a "creature of the night," but not a vampire.

I like your theme, but I think the boots could be more cohesive. Other than those (which aren't really your fault,) I think you've got a super cute outfit. biggrin  

[pickle relish]

You know, now that I think of it, the eyes could be like creepy eyes peering out at you in the darkness. You know, in movies when you just see eyes looking at you from the bushes or something...?

Anyways, I still think it's pretty awesome. mrgreen  

[Phaeton]

It's all Renaissance steam punk goodness. The colors come together well and it's more character like. Get rid of the hat though.  

[Erverain]

Very Gothic Lolita, but is the cane necessary? Perhaps some sort of plush or the like would work better?  

[Kusaragi]

You took my suggestion! I'm honored, I love the overall look of this right now, the strap of your sword sets everything off nicely, and the Red Plus on your forehead is a nice contrast, I'm not sure I would change anything from this avatar.  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

Creepy, but fabulous. I like the contrast between the red details and the yellow eyes, it lends the face more weight... I also like the use of the Fremere hair. biggrin

The only thing I can see that isn't awesome is the devil wings around the ankle - they're too simple-looking for my taste. I'd have liked to see some industrial-looking boots or an interesting, creepy backdrop item there instead.

pickle relish

You know, now that I think of it, the eyes could be like creepy eyes peering out at you in the darkness. You know, in movies when you just see eyes looking at you from the bushes or something...?

Anyways, I still think it's pretty awesome. icon_mrgreen.gif

Why thank you. That was kind of what I wanted, like when you're looking around the darkness and see an animal's glowing eyes and it just reminds you that you can't see at all, and that you're in terrible danger. xd  

[xDarkPisces]

Steph: She is a living constellation. biggrin

Mystic. I love it. :3 I like how you sort of blend a bit with the background but stick out enough to be a definite figure.  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

Thanks. whee

For yours, I like your overall look. The black makes the colors pop, and the green/red combo is both classic and tastefully done. I love the textured look that your items give your body. The only thing I don't adore are the squiggly lines above your head - I think it's the wrong shade of green, but then again, it helps bring the focus in a neat circle around your avi. Good work. biggrin  

[NativeBlueXV]

I love the Night time feel i get with your avi. its lovely  

[Taeryyn]

It's a set. Of course it matches and goes well together. Zero points for creativity, though.

I would try to achieve the same look with pieces from different sets.  

[NativeBlueXV]

Taeryyn

It's a set. Of course it matches and goes well together. Zero points for creativity, though.

I would try to achieve the same look with pieces from different sets.

-smirks- here. better? this is my normal avi.  

[wakusei]

@ Tae - I love your current avatar. It has a nice flow and good color balance~

@ organization_13_gurl - Makes for a nice "character avatar" although some of the clothing elements seem out of place. Like that hat....it doesn't really go with the rest.