Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Taeryyn]

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-smirks- here. better? this is my normal avi.

Go smirk at someone else. rolleyes

Anyway...

I like this look a lot better. Not really a fan of the shoes with the rest of the look, but they work well enough. I don't care for the greenish background, either, but that's just personal preference. It fits with the overall theme, for sure. I would try another weapon or handheld item, because the gold hilt on the g blade doesn't really fit with the rest.

@Waku: Oops, you snuck in there before me. x3 I love lovelove this~
Tons of detail, black and white elegant lurveliness. The glamrock headband totally complements the lacy details on the shirt and the tights. The buck teeth add some humour to it. whee So pretty~!  

[NativeBlueXV]

oh, dont be here if your not gonna be playful.

and thanks. i cant really find anything for the shoes, you know, that actually look good on vampire feet. as for the g blade..hmm..i dunno why i threw that on there. i never have before sweatdrop he green background is just to give it an outdoor feeling  

[Kusaragi]

I like the simplicity of your avatar, it's understated, and has a nice color balance.

I think that some of the arm tattoos would work well with what you have.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Very nice~
Although maybe it would look better without the Gift of the Gods antennae =/ It seems oddly positioned (I think it's cuz it doesn't seem like it's coming out from the top of the head or something like that) and the black and white doesn't seem to fit with the gold details on the lower half. Maybe a bit of gold on the head to balance it out? I dunno...

But it's still very good 3nodding As usual~  

[pickle relish]

Awww, Invi is cute!!

I like the use of the devil imp to go with the dress, although Gimpi doesn't match quite as well. Your hair goes nicely with the red hem on the dress, too. ^^  

[Kusaragi]

Very straight forward but very nice.

I'm not sure I would add/change anything.

I added a crown. Do you think I should have the Red gems or the Blue gems?  

[pickle relish]

Hmmm. It looks a little off with the red. Maybe blue instead? There's not much red on your avi, except for the sort of reddish brown on the...Reve Rouille?

Other than that, it looks great. *nodnod*  

[nedozuki_88]

i'ts very nice! maybe a change of arm positions? lolz but you dont have to listen to me ^^;  

[Aba_Ebi]

Very poofy, I like the color scheme. But I'm not sure how well it fits your skin tone. *Shrug*  

[xDarkPisces]

I like where you're going with it. A couple of items don't really go with the flow of the outfit, like the arm bands, but you're on the right track. 3nodding Keep working on it.  

[Erverain]

A very nicely coordinated Triton. The orange meshes naturally, and the staff works well with the design overall. No complaints from me.  

[Taeryyn]

If chess pieces could come to life, you'd be a rook. o_o' Waiting to zip down a whole row of squares and bash the hell out of a bishop with that sword.

I like it. I don't really have any complaints. It's got lots of texture and detail on the top half, and very little on the bottom half. Unfortunately, I'm drawing a blank as far as suggestions to fix that. There are so few anklets, and most of them layer under boots anyway. Not that anklets would even work with the outfit in general. =/ Oh well.  

[Kusaragi]

I changed my central focus, instead of the ankh I used the Gogh Reed and the circle tattoo.

Tae, you look rather Evil in a Ceramic doll kind of way. I like what you did with it.  

[Phaeton]

It's creepy. I mean it does that quite well. It's just that the chain mask kinda pops out from the rest of the setup.  

[Taeryyn]

I'm a big fan of the sweet lace items. I really, really love the look; you're like a porcelain doll. A possessed doll, though, what with the red eyes. x3 The fact that so many of the items are part of a set, though... ^^;

Anyway, aside from suggesting that you try to achieve a similar look while mixing and matching more, I do like it a whooollle lot.