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 Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:32 am
LOVE TO RUIN-
I am ruined
Do people like to just ******** with me
Or is this all I can see
Sucking it up and getting around
Some one ruins what I have found
[Chorus]
Just ******** ruined
You just have to ruin
X2
Things start to become good
But then someone sucks more than they should
Life starts to become easy again
And you have to make it worse than its been
[Chorus]
X2
I am ruined
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tell me how you like it. I dont know when ill make up how the song will sound. Its going to be a punk song though
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 3:28 pm
i like your song, although it's a bit short it's really good. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:25 pm
too short i get the stroy but it is way to short remeber that songs for at least 3 to 4 min and that might be 1 to 2 if you really strech it out
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:59 pm
its cool but i think that it could be better....keep trying youll get it soon
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:30 pm
it's good, but it needs to be a bit longer.
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:20 pm
short but its pretty good
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:59 pm
You have done very well. It doesnt need to be longer. How you put it to music is all that matters. What beat you give it etc. But what I see here it is pointing towards either Punk or Metal.
Happy writings.
PEACE
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