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 Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 1:40 pm
I like this avi but I don't know if I should put it up for the arena? Be honest. 
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 1:49 pm
Here's the description:
Sorrow of a Maiden
There once was a maiden. She lived away from her parents, they were the king and queen of a country but had her live out in the country. For there would be people out to steal her away. Do to the visits being scarce, the maiden contended with a garden of white roses. The butterflies were her company. One day, her parents finally came around to visit, unknowing of a group that had fallowed them. After the King and Queen left, the maiden went to her garden. She was ambushed by the group, she was knocked unconscious. Later, when she woke up, she found that she had been bound by her own roses. But, one of the butterflies had fallowed her. Whispering hope and encouraging words to her, she burst into tears.
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:42 pm
Well, I think that depends on what you're going for in the arena.
Your avatar is attractive and respectable; but I don't think it has the punch of an arena winner. So if you want to enter for fun and feedback; go for it. You'll probably end up with a score somewhere in the 3 range and some friendly, helpful comments. But if you're deadset on winning I would look to adding extra elements that either match the colors of the avatar to give it more visual appeal or the story to make it more well rounded.
Also, run your description through a spellchecker before posting it. wink
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 10:24 pm
Thank you, yea. I know, my spelling stinks.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:10 pm
I actually think its a very cute avi and a very cute story to match it. So why not.
(lol no pun intended)
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:17 pm
i like it, go 4 it! the description that goes with its pretty good too
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