Poem

[InnEvil]

God is loveing.
God is just.
God helps all in need.
God never lies.
god never betrays.
he shalt never sin.
he is perfect.
saintin may taint the skin of his followers.
but never the heart.
God resides within everyone if they shall except him.  

[faithful quenga]

There's a Time to Laugh "Ephesians 2: 8-9"

could you please put some periods or commas in that poem? I can't tell where one sentence ends and another begins. sweatdrop confused

And a Time to Cry "Romans 5: 3-5"

 

[InnEvil]

faithful quenga

There's a Time to Laugh "Ephesians 2: 8-9"

could you please put some periods or commas in that poem? I can't tell where one sentence ends and another begins. sweatdrop confused

And a Time to Cry "Romans 5: 3-5"

Sowwy  

[faithful quenga]

There's a Time to Laugh "Ephesians 2: 8-9"

thank you!


now that I can read it out better, I really like what it says. Though I would say God IS love not God may love because there is no question about his love and he is the epitome of love.

And a Time to Cry "Romans 5: 3-5"

 

[emorhconom esor]

Poems don't have to have periods.  

[Green_Fuu]

gothic_black_rose

Poems don't have to have periods.

Agree


"except" for the last part. I am rotundly against it! God doesn't reside in anyone who excepts him, he resides in anyone who accepts him, lol.

I know simple mistake, but makes a huge difference.
XD