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[POEM] Friends vs. BFF's

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i am sad mami


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:16 pm


this is a poem I wrote in July. It's just an exaggerated freewrite poem about the difference between friends and best friends. I know it's been rewritten thousands of times, but here's my version. Enjoy xd .

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Friends make small talk
Best friends act as if you're a diary

Friends accidentally lose your phone number
Best friends call you to get your number

Friends knock before entering your room
Best Friends barge in and jump on your bed

Friends tell you to watch your calories
Best friends munch on Twinkies with you

Friends will get jealous of a guy you like
Best friends will make wedding plans

Friends will ask you if you need help when you fall down
Best friends will break their leg just to be with you

Friends pat your back if you start crying
Best friends will sob harder

Friends disappear
Best friends will always be there
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:26 pm


Your right this thing has been done a lot, but I like yours. whee

Kenutsu Yasashiku


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:44 pm


ColorfulCrayonsOfContent

Friends accidentally lose your phone number
Best friends call you to get your number

This one made me Lol.
But it's true. xd
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:51 pm


Thanks heart


i am sad mami


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Glaciofluvial

PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:42 pm


ColorfulCrayonsOfContent

Friends will ask you if you need help when you fall down
Best friends will break their leg just to be with you


I like this part most heart
PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:41 pm


Glaciofluvial
ColorfulCrayonsOfContent

Friends will ask you if you need help when you fall down
Best friends will break their leg just to be with you


I like this part most heart


Heh. Heh. I don't know anybody on the face of the Earth that would intentionally break. Their. Leg.


i am sad mami


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Shadyness

PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 9:32 pm


Bah. Way to make me realize I have no friends gonk

In all seriousness, yes it's been done to death, but for people that love their best friend it will always be relevant wink
PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:53 pm


Shadyness
Bah. Way to make me realize I have no friends gonk

In all seriousness, yes it's been done to death, but for people that love their best friend it will always be relevant wink


Ehh, I think only a handful of friends would actually do that for their other friends lol. I know I have no friends that are like that xd


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