10 000 words in, a lot more to go. Although, at the moment, I need some heavy critiquing. It's up to chapter three, plus a preface.
Help me? A chapter (maybe less or more) would do :3 I just need a bit of feedback.

Note: I don't like posting on gaia, so I do apologize for the inconvenience.

Here's the link:
Playing Adeline

Thank you.

On aside note:
If anyone has wattpad, please post it there and possibly vote and recommend me and my story.
If not, please post here smile

xxx Annabelle