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 Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:56 pm
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monckey77 cereza91 cereza91 monckey77 cereza91 thanks for the complement, but honestly it's not all that great. That's another talent, if you can't seem to think it's great and you always try and fix it and make it better, eventually you get a work of art even time cannot forget. thanks. at least someone thinks that, unlike my older bro. here something just for you: you are my all always there even with out my call I've turned you into my coverall so when my tears are to dewfall your love is soon to befall wait a sec, it sounds better like this: you are my all turning you into my coverall your always there even with out my call so when my tears are to dewfall your love is soon to befall Another beautiful one, thanks for that.
your welcome. Hey why not we become friends?
And also I just started my new gaia job as a poet.
These poems and another one will be there.
Check it out ok?
its in the opening day form in the GaiaOnline Center Guild |
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:08 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:55 am
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cereza91 what do you guys think of this: Waiting is all that I can muster As another night falls To that of which is my time Entice me was your words Time and time again Guide me now as you did Interfering with the hands of fate Reminding to all who fall Love is but more than a mire word
Thats rlly good |
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:57 am
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Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Wow! THese are so awesome! Mine suck. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. They don't even rhyme.
They dont have 2. Its rlly good |
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:10 pm
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Scene of Dark Angel Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Wow! THese are so awesome! Mine suck. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. They don't even rhyme. They dont have 2. Its rlly good
biggrin Thanks! |
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:01 am
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Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Scene of Dark Angel Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Wow! THese are so awesome! Mine suck. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. They don't even rhyme. They dont have 2. Its rlly good Thanks!
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:31 pm
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Scene of Dark Angel cereza91 what do you guys think of this: Waiting is all that I can muster As another night falls To that of which is my time Entice me was your words Time and time again Guide me now as you did Interfering with the hands of fate Reminding to all who fall Love is but more than a mire word Thats rlly good
thanks. do you do poetry? If so what kind? |
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:37 pm
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Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Wow! THese are so awesome! Mine suck. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. They don't even rhyme.
lol silly you. poems don't have to rhyme. In fact, those are the best ones, in my opinion. 3nodding I like it lots! I've totally felt that way before. |
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:52 pm
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cereza91 Scene of Dark Angel cereza91 what do you guys think of this: Waiting is all that I can muster As another night falls To that of which is my time Entice me was your words Time and time again Guide me now as you did Interfering with the hands of fate Reminding to all who fall Love is but more than a mire word Thats rlly good thanks. do you do poetry? If so what kind?
Yeh i do all diffrent kind biggrin |
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 5:01 pm
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Scene of Dark Angel Tear drops fall to the ground No one wants to care any more I feel worthless and hurt This worlds full of fakes and pricks No one seems to care if i get hurt Loneliness and hopelessness My crying soul falls apart But no one will care its as if in not even there Im invisible When people do see me they say theres that emo girl Life never felt so bad untill my friends went Why does the world hate me Why does it always rain on me All these whys and yet no answers. Just 1 of my poems U dont like it tough s**t cus this fourms for expression urself. X_x
very sad. Sounds like you need a hug. Can i give you a hug? xp |
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:47 pm
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The Lost Smile Scene of Dark Angel Tear drops fall to the ground No one wants to care any more I feel worthless and hurt This worlds full of fakes and pricks No one seems to care if i get hurt Loneliness and hopelessness My crying soul falls apart But no one will care its as if in not even there Im invisible When people do see me they say theres that emo girl Life never felt so bad untill my friends went Why does the world hate me Why does it always rain on me All these whys and yet no answers. Just 1 of my poems U dont like it tough s**t cus this fourms for expression urself. X_x very sad. Sounds like you need a hug. Can i give you a hug? xp
Maybe |
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:12 pm
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