Alone, A Poem By Viola Snickett

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No one's here.
I'm on my own.
No one near.
Nothing known,
will rid me of this sorrow.
I am all alone.  

[egoxromantic]

I like it.
It's short, sweet, and has a nice rhythm.  

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egoxromantic

I like it.
It's short, sweet, and has a nice rhythm.

4laugh Thanks. That's actually one of my better ones.
Blah.  

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Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.

Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.  

[egoxromantic]

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Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.

Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.

Hmmmm...
I couldn't find the rhythm in that.
Where is the beat?  

[Xxx Pocket Watch xxX]

egoxromantic

Xxx Pocket Watch xxX

Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.

Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.

Hmmmm...
I couldn't find the rhythm in that.
Where is the beat?

I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well.  

[egoxromantic]

Xxx Pocket Watch xxX

egoxromantic

Xxx Pocket Watch xxX

Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.

Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.

Hmmmm...
I couldn't find the rhythm in that.
Where is the beat?

I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well.

I guess if you read it really fast.  

[Xxx Pocket Watch xxX]

egoxromantic

Xxx Pocket Watch xxX

egoxromantic

Xxx Pocket Watch xxX

Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.

Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.

Hmmmm...
I couldn't find the rhythm in that.
Where is the beat?

I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well.

I guess if you read it really fast.

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