This is a character I've made for an RP that doesnt seem to be starting any time soon so I was hoping I could get some feedback on my character before I start Rping with him. Hopefully I could reuse him if I'm convinced he's that good.

Here's the Rp>>Forest of Darkness



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      Full name ||

            Arèthein Serhyphiane


      Aliases ||

            Ari & Serhy


      Age ||

            Twenty-Nine


      Race ||

            Vasily


      Sexuality ||

            Pansexual


      Height and Weight ||

            5'7 and 130lbs


      Distinguishing Marks ||

            Long red streaked hair & moon and star tattoo, back of the neck.


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      Alignment ||

            None


      Weapon ||

            Earth & Dagger


      Fighting Style ||

            Nimble, quick, light on his feet, one clear death blow. Usually avoided.


      Animal ||

            He has a strong affinity with horses; all variations naturally trust him and will bend to his will if he so wishes it (though he dislikes forcing them against their instinct). He is able to communicate with them by mimicking them and understands their social structure and standings as well as he does his own. This is a natural inborn skill that came as a result of being a Vasily. His familiar is an orphan unicorn called Castile. In general most animal won’t see him as a threat and will let him pass in peace as long as he isn’t tainted by other people or creatures.


      Earth ||

            Most of his power training have been focused on healing instead of the typical offence and battle techniques. He’s learned to use it fluently on plants as far as being able to grow trees from a seed with optimum condition. On animals and humans, form with complex structures, he has to channel his powers through runes which he paints onto the body, an ancient Fae medium that was forgotten for many decades. Writing the correct runes takes concentration and a steady hand as the slightest change can provide the wrong effect, this can’t be done it the heat of battle or on an unwilling participant. Although the method is very efficient in terms of energy and power, it is still taxing on the body.



      Weaknesses ||

            Although he has a lot of strength when it comes to his powers, physically he is very weak and can be easily over powered, if you can catch him. Although he is not threatening to animals and can have a calming aura, his pure soul can give darker creatures a feeling of oppression making them more likely to attack him. His strength is only as good as the earth that surround him, he is particularly strong in Erinon , Itlhian and the Queens Woods, he is at his weakest in inner cities or Maequit and Mouraa in general. He is also particularly affected by unnatural poisons (ie. Not snake venom). His last and arguably worst weakness is his ability to be empathic to pain. He feels all pain including that of his enemies if he is currently fighting them, this only stops when the other person is no longer in pain, too far or dead. Being near childbirth can render him in a comatose state for up to a week. He also suffers from claustrophobia in stressful situation or times of duress.


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      Personality ||

            On the exterior he appears to be quite tranquil, unfazed by most thing that he comes across only focusing on the task at hand. The main reason for this is that he is careful and calculated as most healers are, though it is not a recognised trait. He has a strong rigid set of morals and ideals that he will express if he believes it is needed, this usually gives him the appearance of being naïve among the court since he is neither motivated by power or greed but on a whimsical ideal of true happiness for his people a quality of life. He can be alienated by these kinds of motivations and generally doesn’t understand them as they do not occur in social standings other than human. This makes him feel quite isolated and makes him more like to stick to himself and his familiar, he will sometimes worry about his own worth and whether he is actually helping at all. On a lighter note, he adores to immerse his senses with jewellery fragrant oils and interesting fabrics and food.


      History ||

            Arèthein was born to Prince Zephyr, King Addriak's younger brother. As the first male of his generation he was sent to the Palace to be trained as a Prince and representative of the court, though in his more later years once he had settled in he was kept in close contact with his birth family. As a child he gained much favour among the Palace with his sweet, easy going nature and youth, not least with the Queen-to-be. She was as kind to him as she was to the animals she cared for and awaken his healer nature by teaching him the ancient rune from a young age. A riding trip with her a few of the nobles is what found him with his other half, Castile. Hunter from a an old Demon family had stalked, poisoned and lured a mare a her foal away from the protection of the forest. When the party had arrived the mare was already gone, hacked open to get the valuable black market body pieces. It had been a bloody affair, not something a 12 year old boy should have seen. With the military inclined people gone with the guards to to a sweep of the area he found himself drawn to a small hidden clearing, wandering away from the others, where the small foal had been hidden by his mother. In that moment surrounded by fear and death their two souls bonded leaving Ari with a unique case of a Unicorn familiar. The hunters were never found.
            He immersed himself helping the foal grow and repair from the psychology damage, this fuelled most of most of his will to learn the old rune which were usually reserved for the older and more mature. This was the time that the issues between the two kingdoms occurred, his closeness and similarity with the Lady put Arèthein out of the kings favour, forcing him way from the courts to spend more time in the forest as not to agitate the king further. He became more distance with the people of the land and in turn more in tune with the land. When the Queens forest started to die he took it upon himself, sometimes leaving for days on end, to heal it over. The moon and star is a symbol of his allegiance to protecting the forest.


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      Race History ||

            Vasily are a race of Fae with unknown origins, the gene is random among Fae and quite rare. They have incomplete souls until the find a horse familiar although few are known to take other animals as familiars. Major separation causes great pain and can damage the soul. They are peaceful creatures of light and are closely linked with nature and make good healers though they are not as good with people and don’t integrate as well.


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      Username ||

            Moonwolf96