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Shaddaling

Wrathful Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2017 3:43 pm
Name: Saain
Age: 47
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weyr: Western now( was spending time in Zamona camp)
Rider Rank: Wing rider (Returned with thread fall)
Previous Rank/Craft: Healer/Journeyman (Trauma/Surgeon specialization )

Physical Description:Saain is a curvy women with wide hips and ample bust. She has a soft oval face framed by auburn curls and a slightly rounded chin. Her eyes are a middling shade of blue, large and open. She has feathery winged brows and a small pert nose. She likes deep dark colors, and glass jewelry.


Personality:

Positive Trait List capable, clear-headed, peaceful
Negative Trait List stubborn, fussy,

History: Saain grew up in a southern colt hold as the daughter of the local healer with two other siblings. She had a talent for the craft and it was with glad tidings that she was taught and then sent off to the healer hall. She studied hard, focusing on trauma and surgery and when she walked the tables she returned to the south.

She was hired on in Dunto Weyrhold, working to learn more when the last clutch was laid to the old queen. She was on the sands expecting to handle possible lacerations and bite marks and ended up with a upset little green, trying to hide in her dress.

She never considered being a dragon rider and found her classes put on hold as she cared for Serinuth and started to make friends with others in the group. When the young queen riders left and

Two daughters with Naanash - Sasha and Sana - 11, 8

Other:

DRAGON
Name: Serinuth
Age: 23
Color: Green
Size: 26'
Physical Description: Serinuth was positioned somewhat awkwardly in her egg (possibly accounting for the claustrophobia) and will hatch with an odd hopping gait and crumpled wings. These will naturally mend in time, provided she is given adequate exercise and room to stretch. Still, while she is actually a bit on the larger end for a green, her wings are fairly short and small for her size. These don't impede her in flight - on the contrary, she is excellent at tight maneuvers and has the agility of a much smaller green, but she will need to flap her wings much more frequently, making gliding difficult and stamina a problem. She is much more suited to quick, fluttering, darting flights than to the long haul.

Serinuth will start off a dark olive green with markings of yellowy lime green on her stomach, but as she grows that patch of lime will spread until it is her dominant color. In time, she will switch nearly entirely: going from olive green marked with lime to lime marked with olive.
Personality: I got shadows snapping at my tail who say I'm no damn good
But that's just halfway through, all that I'm good for is you


To say that Serinuth has self-esteem issues would be approximately on par with saying that the sun is yellow. It would appear that neurosis is more or less the canary's default state of being. She'll be practically apologizing for herself straight out of the shell - oh dear, she knows that her sire was a blue and her egg was curiously golden but not particularly metallic, and she hopes you weren't expecting something bigger or shinier than her, oh no...

It is probable that these issues will plague her right through weyrling training. Even when she's technically old enough and big enough to fly, she'll be nervous that she'll mess up. The first time she chews firestone, she'll need to triple- and quadruple-check that no one is in her way, because what if she accidentally flamed them? Everything about her is anxious and fluttery and full of nervous energy, even the way she hops uneasily from forefoot to forefoot when she's trying to make a decision. And... oh Faranth, don't try to get her into any enclosed spaces. She likes the wallows in the open best because they're under an open sky, but Serinuth is severely claustrophobic and liable to panic in any area that's too small for her to stretch her wings in.

What balances this fear, however, is her kindness and sincerity. Serinuth is nothing if not eager to please - especially towards her rider, but towards others as well. There isn't a cruel or petty bone in Serinuth's body. She's a bit wary of humans other than her rider - she's very much a one-woman dragon, and Serinuth doesn't much like being handled, especially by people other than Saain - but she will warm up readily to anyone who treats her with gentleness and respect. It is highly unlikely that she'll be an effective guard, but if Saain can get her to settle a little as she matures, she could make an excellent healer's dragon.

The one time when Serinuth is really quite forward is during Flights. She will be very specific and quite firm with her demands: she will only be caught by a male who serenades her. Serinuth has a sweet, warbling, beautiful voice which she will show off whenever she is asked. And when it comes time for her to Fly, she expects to hear some bugles and croons in response, gentlemen!
Dragon Art or Proof of Obtainment:User ImageMore lovely from Wish


3553.11.01
Chehaveeth x Likoth - Final Flight
11 Eggs
1 gold / 0 bronzes / 1 brown / 3 blue / 7 green
Anali of Gold Banshidheth :: Weyrless :: Played by Meepfur
V'ail & green Lanreth :: Western :: Played by Shaddaling  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2017 4:26 pm
Name: Serinuth
Color: Green

Appearance: Serinuth was positioned somewhat awkwardly in her egg (possibly accounting for the claustrophobia) and will hatch with an odd hopping gait and crumpled wings. These will naturally mend in time, provided she is given adequate exercise and room to stretch. Still, while she is actually a bit on the larger end for a green, her wings are fairly short and small for her size. These don't impede her in flight - on the contrary, she is excellent at tight maneuvers and has the agility of a much smaller green, but she will need to flap her wings much more frequently, making gliding difficult and stamina a problem. She is much more suited to quick, fluttering, darting flights than to the long haul.

Serinuth will start off a dark olive green with markings of yellowy lime green on her stomach, but as she grows that patch of lime will spread until it is her dominant color. In time, she will switch nearly entirely: going from olive green marked with lime to lime marked with olive.

Personality:
I got shadows snapping at my tail who say I'm no damn good
But that's just halfway through, all that I'm good for is you


To say that Serinuth has self-esteem issues would be approximately on par with saying that Warden M'onk has issues with power tripping. It would appear that neurosis is more or less the canary's default state of being. She'll be practically apologizing for herself straight out of the shell - oh dear, she knows that her sire was a blue and her egg was curiously golden but not particularly metallic, and she hopes you weren't expecting something bigger or shinier than her, oh no...

It is probable that these issues will plague her right through weyrling training. Even when she's technically old enough and big enough to fly, she'll be nervous that she'll mess up. The first time she chews firestone, she'll need to triple- and quadruple-check that no one is in her way, because what if she accidentally flamed them? Everything about her is anxious and fluttery and full of nervous energy, even the way she hops uneasily from forefoot to forefoot when she's trying to make a decision. And... oh Faranth, don't try to get her into any enclosed spaces. She likes the wallows at Warden's because they're under an open sky, but Serinuth is severely claustrophobic and liable to panic in any area that's too small for her to stretch her wings in.

What balances this fear, however, is her kindness and sincerity. Serinuth is nothing if not eager to please - especially towards her rider, but towards others as well. There isn't a cruel or petty bone in Serinuth's body. She's a bit wary of humans other than her rider - she's very much a one-woman dragon, and Serinuth doesn't much like being handled, especially by people other than Saain - but she will warm up readily to anyone who treats her with gentleness and respect. It is highly unlikely that she'll be an effective guard, but if Saain can get her to settle a little as she matures, she could make an excellent healer's dragon.

The one time when Serinuth is really quite forward is during Flights. She will be very specific and quite firm with her demands: she will only be caught by a male who serenades her. Serinuth has a sweet, warbling, beautiful voice which she will show off whenever she is asked. And when it comes time for her to Fly, she expects to hear some bugles and croons in response, gentlemen!

Why me? Saain is a lost soul in many ways: she's lost her son, her freedom, and her purpose. Serinuth will give her something to focus on outside of the past, a fragile young creature who needs her care and her love. And Saain's gentleness and forgiving spirit will help Serinuth overcome some of her insecurities and be more comfortable with herself. They are kindred spirits in some ways, although Saain will always be the calmer of the pair. But Serinuth might just help Saain find her freedom.

Based On: The timbrado canary and All That I'm Good For.  

Shaddaling

Wrathful Shapeshifter


Shaddaling

Wrathful Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2017 2:01 pm
tossing up so I don't loose her  
PostPosted: Sat Sep 23, 2017 3:38 pm
Toss up again and ready finally  

Shaddaling

Wrathful Shapeshifter


Masterharper
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 6:33 pm
There are a few issues that jump out at me.

Warden's don't exist in Echoes of Pern. So you'll need to remove all references to Wardens from the Warden M'onk to the reason she likes the wallows at Warden.

You mention she's lost a son in the dragon profile, but there's nothing noted about it in her history. (Unless I missed it. xD )

Her description also doesn't seem to match the art. She's still olive green with lime markings and a lime stomach. I suspect you'll need to remove that as that just didn't happen in EoP.

You mention her sire was a blue. As of right now, that's not the case. Her sire was a bronze if she manages to get into the clutch from Ierne.

Sorry! Once you get that fixed she should be fine. gaia_star
 
PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 6:34 pm
There are a few issues that jump out at me.

Warden's don't exist in Echoes of Pern. So you'll need to remove all references to Wardens from the Warden M'onk to the reason she likes the wallows at Warden.

You mention she's lost a son in the dragon profile, but there's nothing noted about it in her history. (Unless I missed it. xD )

Her description also doesn't seem to match the art. She's still olive green with lime markings and a lime stomach. I suspect you'll need to remove that as that just didn't happen in EoP.

You mention her sire was a blue. As of right now, that's not the case. Her sire was a bronze if she manages to get into the clutch from Ierne.

Sorry! Once you get that fixed she should be fine. gaia_star
 

Masterharper
Vice Captain


Shaddaling

Wrathful Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2018 3:36 pm
works on clean up  
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