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trueblue14

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 6:15 pm


An Angel’s Love
I feel unwanted and alone,
Broken hearted and disowned,
Unneeded and hurt,
A forgotten toy,
Once loved by the eager hands of a child,
Left in the rain with no where to go,
As disappointment and crushed hope pricks at my eyes,
For unreturned love and loneliness tear and my heart strings,
The room darkens; the light just blinds me now,
The slow sad notes of piano float threw the room,
Leaving deafening echoes in the emptiness of my heart,
Resonating on my tattered heartstrings,
Shall a day ever come that my love be returned,
With any tenderness at all,
Shall be the day when echoes disappear,
And light no longer blinds, but is soft and gentle on my eyes,
The day when loneliness is but a whisper in the shadows,
And my eyes clear of salt,
A day where my heart no longer breaks,
But beats with the ever lasting love of my angel,
Of whom I don’t deserve,

Amanda Kay Sanders

^^^is my own poem... i was all emo when i did it....
what do you think?

PS and while ur at it hows my art??
CHECK OUT MY ART POSTS!!! XD
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FAR AWAY LOOK~
ED COWBOY BEBOP~
DEAD ANGEL~
PRINCESS HOLLY~
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MISTY DEMON~

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:06 pm


Your poem is nice! But I pretty much ADORE your artwork.

Ashlesaurus


trueblue14

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 10:24 am


Ashlesaurus
Your poem is nice! But I pretty much ADORE your artwork.

thank you ooooh so mych!!! blaugh *huggles* that always makes me happy!!! whee whee whee

~true
PostPosted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:15 pm


trueblue14
Ashlesaurus
Your poem is nice! But I pretty much ADORE your artwork.

thank you ooooh so mych!!! blaugh *huggles* that always makes me happy!!! whee whee whee

~true


3nodding hehe! Anytime, hon! Keep up the good work ^_^

Ashlesaurus


Kakone

PostPosted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:43 pm


If this is already finished, I'm terribly sorry. You have a good start to it, but I feel as if you went on a dictionary/thesaurus looking for more intelligent words. It has the intelligent sound to it, but it's not very descriptive. You have talent, but talent needs to be honed and perfected with time.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 12:35 am


you really wrote that?
that's great!

ninja gurl forever


littlewonder

PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:19 am


very nice...
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