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I guess you can call it a LOVE POEM

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randomdinoninja

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:07 pm
My Special Someone
When he gets near
My heart starts beating faster
When he touches me
I get a tingling sensation
When he talks to me
The rest of the world fades away
I get a feeling of longing
To tell him how I feel
I'm being held back
By an unseen force called fear
Fear on what would happen
If he knew the real truth
If we could still be friend
If he only knew
That I can't seem to get him out of my mind
Would my greatest fear about his reaction be realized
OR
Will my dreams become real

I know it's kinda long but it's the only poem that I wrote that I liked. You can criticize it if you want...hope you like it
 
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:35 pm

I like it :3 Most likely, because I can relate to it and such. *nods*

Good job! ;3
 

Lady Ashayat


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:31 am
thanks
 
PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:40 pm

You're welcome. :3
 

Lady Ashayat

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