Im a poet.=]

[TheGreatMoistCaveOfDoooom]

I cant say im a good poet.
Cause that would be a little conceited of me,
but i am proud of my work.
As a manner of showing you this,
i'll post a couple poems =]


Her dreams came tumbling down
As the wind not dare make a sound
Whilest the petals fell to the ground
As she lay in fear upon the mound
He placed a rose upon her hips
As he knelt down for a kiss
Her bloodstained dress was covered in rips
A whisper escaped from her dying lips
"Never forget me, Even like this"


And thats one poem, The next poem..


Let me be your butterfly
For you I'll spread my wings
Let me be your butterfly
I can show you things
Let me be your butterfly
And I will tumble to the ground
Let me be your butterfly
I promise I wont make a sound
Let me be your butterfly
I'll fly up to the sky
Let me be your butterfly
I can raise you up so high
Let me be your butterfly
I can help you see
Let me be your butterfly
And I wont fly from thee


And thats two. So comment and tell me what you think

 

[GC rox 4 eva]

I think those poems are amazing! there really good.. honestly! xd  

[bijou~violette]

Not bad at all! Have you ever thought about publication or entering a writing contest?  

[Fold39Crane]

Wow, you're great with the rhyming. xd I'm a freestyle poet who can't rhyme when needed, so i'm pretty jealous! ^_^

Love to see more of your work around floating about!  

[-Papillon Sombre-]

I like them too. mrgreen



Here's some of mine:

A Couple's Love

A girl always says,
my heart will never break...
A boy always says,
I will never let her go...
A girl always says,
I love him till the end...
A boy always says,
I love her till i die...
Last, they always say,
I will always be with you!





A pressed flower never dies,
while broken heart sits and cries.
In a dark corner over there,
while some point and others stare.
She feels so unloved,
by people and the sky above.
She cannot feel it in her heart,
the passion of love and art.
As she raises her head with tears and all,
a hand reaches for hers so small.
She stands with a smile on her face,
for who is standing next to her place.
For it just happens to be her crush,
and she smiles because of the rush.
Now she can stop all the worry,
and will never have to hurry.
For now she found true love,
and 10 years from now she sees a dove.
Now she'll never blend,
because she's loved until the end.



I hope u liked them too. *@.@* ^^