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Chapter 1: How I learned to hate government.

Max was staring into the ceiling of his barracks. His mind on things past. He remembered the day that he first arrived into the unknown world. I wish I was in a school now… He rolled on his poor excuse for a bed to survey the dark room. He saw pictures of his unit celebrating victories. Smiles and cups of beer. Guns raised in the air. It hasn’t always been that way. Max wasn’t nearly ready for an army life. Back home, he always joked about how he wouldn’t even been able to pass the physical. Unfortunately, the new realm was short on soldiers and were desperate.

That was 3 months ago. Reflecting on that day, Max shut his eyes. They were all a group of paranoid soldiers, expecting the next bomb shell to decimate them. Their guns pointing at him, Max remembers that feeling of fear, fearing that his life was going to end then and there, No one to remember him, none of his family to burry him. He thought he was just going to die and be a number in the war casualties. They searched him and brought him to be tortured. He was crying uncontrollably within the first few minutes. They looked upon him with sorrow and pity. Then they saw that they needed extra soldiers, and threw him into training.

1 month later they put him into a unit and he was on his way for war. The world had weapons that looked different, but fired the same bullets as his realm. The enemy on the other hand, was completely different. The government that was in charge of the land had forcefully taken over other countries using bionic enhanced soldiers. In charge of all of this was a man by the name of Bart Trillion. He forced himself to the top using his nanotech company to corrupt men to do his will.

The rest of the time, Max has been fighting to stay alive in the foreign planet. He’s saved his team from a few skirmishes. He’s got a few odd medals for different things. He kept it next to some of the things he had from home. His Linkin Park wallet he got on his birthday, a now useless cell phone, and currency that the others were intrigued by. The one thing he kept by his side that wasn’t from this world was what he thought was his DS. The thing was, it was always on, never ran out of power, and it was all in a foreign tongue. Even the menu screen was completely different.

“Max.” A soldier on a bed next to him turned over to him. “You still can’t get any sleep?”
Max let out a sigh. “Johnson, I haven’t slept right in three months. Even if tomorrow is suppose to be the biggest battle of this war…”

Chapter 2: Bunker life

“Alright! Time for you ladies to get your lazy asses out of those beds and meet in the tactical room at 06 hours!” Sergeant Briggs opened up the door suddenly and turned on the lights. All the men in the room groaned and complained, except Max, who just leaped out of bed and began getting dressed. Briggs slammed the door shut to make sure the rest of the group. Johnson got up lazily. His features were better marked by the light of the room. Tall, thin, with dark hair. He was the laziest of the group. “Max, why are you always the first one to get ready. It’s not a good thing to be a brow..”

Max threw a bar of soap and hit Johnson in the face. “Don’t finish that sentence. Faster I can dress the faster I can get to the meeting. Faster I get there the faster its over. Faster its over the faster I can get out and start killing those freaks. Faster I kill them the faster the war is over. Faster the war is over, the faster I can…” Max slammed the locker his clothes were in and walked out.

“Damn, what’s his problem?” Lenny yelled out. He was another fellow soldier. An A-typical blonde man, rugged looks, and full of himself. “He’s not the only one of us who wants this all to end fast.” Lenny sluggishly got out of his bed and headed towards his locker. Johnson shrugged. “I don’t know, some times that boy has a stick up his a** and other times he’s really loose. Just don’t piss him off. I don’t know what they did to him in training, but he’s one crazy son of a ***** out on the field.”

Lenny pushed his hair back in a sarcastic motion. “He doesn’t scare me. He’s just some geek they pulled out of some city.” One of the other soldiers popped their head out of a locker. “I heard he made a special request to be allowed to care a short sword for melee combat.” Johnson rolled his eyes.
“Another weapon request? This one is going to get shot down for sure.”

Five minutes later the whole squad was in the meeting room. Men and woman were sitting at a long table. The room was extremely bland, with the only exception of the map of the battlefield. Everyone was having small conversations. Max was staring around the room while Johnson was telling him about his family. “Johnson, I do not want to be set up with your sister when the war is over, blind dates are scary.”
Johnson frowned. “Come on, she would be perfect for you. If you did, I would see if my family would let you stay awhile till you find a place of your own.” Max’s expression went blank. Its actually a tempting offer. Its not like I have anywhere to go after the war.

Suddenly the door busted open. Sergeant Briggs came in and walked to the end of the table. “Listen up you maggots, today is your lucky day. Were joining forces with the special ops to bring this war to an end…”

Chapter 4
Red Fox

“Well, it’s been about an hour, guess she’ll be coming soon.” Max was laying down on his bed, he had what he now called his FDS, or Fake DS. “The hell is wrong with this thing? It doesn’t even have the slots for games on it anymore. I can’t read any of this nonsense on here..” He fiddled with it before, but it wouldn’t react to anything he did. “This sucks.”
“Hello? Anyone in here?” It was the sound of a woman, very soft sounding. Max almost didn’t hear it.
“Uh, yeah! I’m over here.” He got up quickly and then saw her. She had tight black clothing on with what looked like armor on her shoulders, with long bright red hair and green eyes. “Are you Max?”
Max didn’t know what to say at first. “Y-yeah, I’m Max. You must be Red Fox.” She giggled.
“The one and only. I’m here to tell you about the mission. But first we have to get you new equipment.”
She snapped her fingers and another covert-ops member came through the door with a box of clothes and some weapons. He placed it right in front of Max and walked out. “Whoa.” Max looked through the new equipment.

“That’s not all.” Red Fox put her hand to her side and took off a long slender bag off of her belt. “You have had some interesting weapon’s request, but now that your part of the covert-op’s, you can actually carry a special request weapon. We picked your last entry.” She untied the bag and reached inside. It was a katana, midsized, with a blue wooden sheath and a blue wrapped handle. The guard was in the design of a dragon. “Wow, I didn’t think I would actually get anything I requested.” Max looked in awe as Red Fox handed it to him. He held out his hands and took it carefully. “Now, everyone in the team goes by a code name, until this war is over, that is their one and only name. As you already probably have guess, Red Fox is mine, and since I’m the squad leader, it is up to me to come up with your code name.” She looked up and started thinking. “Oh, I know the perfect name.” She pointed to the sword. “The Blue Warrior. Fitting isn’t it?” She smiled and crossed her arms.
“Heh, perfect.” Max couldn’t help but smirk.
“Ok, you only have a few minutes, suit up and meet me outside.”
“Yes ma’am.” Max saluted. Red Fox saluted back and turned to the door and walked out.
“Hmm, Blue Warrior huh? I like it.”

Chapter 6
Big Bang

“Ok, were here at the target site.” Everyone stopped and turned to Red Fox. “Bug Eyes! Prep the explosives.” A man with large glasses pulled out a pack and pulled out some large packs of what looked like C-4. “Everyone else, get back, this is going to be one large explosion.” Everyone bolted towards the back of the tunnel. They waited a few moments and saw Bug Eye’s running towards them. “We got a few seconds!” He said loudly. Suddenly there was a large explosion that shook the mine. Small rocks started falling from the ceiling while dust came rushing through. As soon as the shaking and the dust subsided, Red Fox rose her hand. “Dark Shadow, recon, see if we got through.” A man with his face wrapped in a black cloth nodded and dashed towards the blast site. “Wow, that guys fast.” Max scratched the back of his head. Moment later the man returned. “We’re all the way through, we better hurry, the alarm is already gone off.”
Red Fox turned to the rest of the group. “Alright, lets move!” Everyone ran towards the new hole they blew right into what looked like an office building. “Golem, give everyone a boost up!” Red turned to a large, very built man. “Yes ma’am!” He rushed ahead of everyone, turned around and got on his knees right under the hole.

“Go! Go! Go!” Red was shouting at the top of her lungs. Dark Shadow was the first to Golem, he placed his foot in his hands. Golem hurtled him through the hole. Soon everyone was getting launched into the building. “Blue, your next!” Max looked over and nodded. He charged at Golem who was ready for him. He jumped into Golems hand. Next moment he was flying through the hole and landed on tile. He looked behind him to see that the explosion had also created a small barrier. “That’s handy.” Max joined the rest of the team. Red Fox followed through the hole. Golem jumped and grabbed the ledge and pulled himself up. Soon there were soldiers coming through the hallway and began firing. “Take cover!” Red yelled as everyone ducked behind the barrier. “Half of you stay here and take care of those men, the rest of you come with me!” She looked over in Max’s general direction, which meant that he was the second half. Aw man, I wanted some action. He followed behind her, with Bug Eye’s and Golem as the rest stayed behind.

They soon came to a door out of the hallway. “Planned perfectly, this is Trillions room.” Red motioned to Golem. He nodded and pulled his arm back. He swung with full force and knocked the door right open. They jumped in, only to be met by a row of soldiers. “Get back!” Red yelled. They dived back behind the doors as the soldiers opened fire. “****! Wasn’t expecting that!” She pulled out a machine gun, similar to an SMG. “Prepare to return fire!” Max pulled out two pistols as Bug Eye’s reached in his bag and got a .45 revolver. Golem took out of an RPG launcher off from his back. “Golem, when your ready!” Red leaned her back against the wall. Golem nodded and loaded the rocket. He stood up with the RPG over his shoulder and kicked the door out of the way. As he fired, the rocket streamed out of the barrel, right into the middle of the row. Machine and body parts flew every where as the explosion ripped through the nanotech soldiers. “Now!” Red Fox, Max, and Bug Eyes turned into the room and picked off the rest of the men. Bullets whizzed by Max’s head as he took out two men. The sounds of his pistol merged with the rapid fire of Red’s machine gun, and the loud bangs of Bug Eye’s revolver. Then it all stopped, as the last nanotech soldier fell to the floor. Max turned back around to see if Golem was ok. He was sitting on the ground, holding his shoulder. “Golem, you going to be ok?” He looked up and gave a thumbs up. Max smirked and then turned around to look for Bart. “Is he even in here?” Suddenly the sound of hands clapping emerged from the smoke.

Chapter 8
Time’s up

Max was walking through a poorly lit hallway. He was contemplating back between the destruction behind him, and the man that caused it. “Despite the fact that I didn’t know those two men well, they were good soldiers, they shouldn’t have had to die.” He picked up his pace as he saw a door approaching. “Almost there.” As he reached the door, he stopped and kicked it open, drawing his guns at the same instance. When the door broke open, he held his pistols up at the man sitting across the room. He was behind the desk, with a name plate on it. “Bart Trillion aye?”

“Yes, it is the one and only. If I may be so brave to ask for your name?” He said it in more of a mocking tone than anything else. “Heh, you can call me Blue Warrior.”
“Ah, one of those silly covert op names hmm? Well then, how about I just call you ‘Blue’?” He turned his chair to face the window behind him. “Doesn’t matter what you call me, it’s not going to change why I’m here.” Max put one of the pistols away.
“Oh, are you going to turn me in?” He spun back around and put his hands on the desk.
“Nope, going to kill you, despicable b*****d.” He aimed the gun right at his head.
“Oh no my young friend, it will be you who dies.” He reached under his desk and pressed a button. Suddenly the wall panels next to Max fell off to revel electrical coils. Shortly after the coils released an electrical current between each other, going through Max’s body. Bart pressed the button again and it stopped. “Ah, fell into my little devious trap boy.” Max fell to the ground, but he caught himself with his hands before he fell down all the way. I… I should be dead… what saved me? He could hear a faint beeping noise in one of his pockets. What’s going on with my DS?

“Odd, you should be dead…” Bart got out of his chair and walked over to the weakened Max. “I’ll just finish you off with your own gun.” Max looked over to see that his gun had fallen out of his hand, but he couldn’t summon the strength to pick it up. “Aw, look at how pathetic you look. You probably could have made a good soldier, too bad using nanites would destroy your personality.” He picked up the gun and put it to the head of Max. “Any last words?” The beeping got a little louder. “Hmm, what is that? Is that a bomb? You little s**t! I had a plan to get out of here but you ruined it now!” He cocked the gun back. “Time for you to die!”
“No!” Max gathered as much strength as he could and knocked the gun out of Bart’s hand. He stood up and pulled out his sword. Bart was too shock to do anything, he wasn’t sure what to do. Max pulled back and then drove the sword through Bart’s throat. He reeled back and coughed up blood all over, as the blood from his neck covered his suit. He stumbled behind his desk, trying to find another button. Max ran over to him and grabbed the sword. “You’ve done enough, your time is over.” He held to the sword with a firm grip, then kicked Bart off of it. The force of the kick sent Bart out of the window behind him, falling into a group of fighting soldiers.

Just then, Red Fox came running into the room. “Blue!” Max looked over to her.
“It’s over. He’s dead.” Red Fox smiled.
“Finally, all these long hard years.” She started walking over to Max. He smiled, but then suddenly there was a loud buzzing sound.
“What the…?” There soon was a bright light that came from him. Red Fox covered her eyes. After a moment she took her hands from her eyes. Max Herrigan had disappeared.

You should make a novel out of this.