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| Poetry is... |
| A marvelous way of expressing ones emotions and thoughts! |
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| A way to let depression escape. |
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| Magical! Simply magical! |
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| Just a bunch of rhymy words... |
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| Poe-who now? |
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 Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:42 am
Hey peoples! whee When I'm not playing on Gaia, doodling, or watching Naruto, I write poetry! whee I've actually on just recently started sweatdrop ... but what the hey! rofl I've had one of my poems published in a book and recieved an award for it already blaugh , so... um... yeah. sweatdrop
Feel free to tell me what you think! 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:44 am
My published poem...
My Town
In my town
The grass is lush and green
And the sky a sapphire blue.
The trees in the yards
Stand tall and proud
Like soldiers guarding a priceless treasure.
In my town
The slow rumble of the cars
As they glide down the avenues
Is a sweet lullaby
For all who need rest.
The children laugh and play tag
In the jungles they call their back yards
As their parents chat on porches.
In my town
You can’t walk a block
Without getting a friendly hello
Or a smile that shines like the sun.
The people are close, like a large family
And they’re there for each other
When things go for the worst.
This is my town,
My family,
My home.
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:47 am
Just one I did in my spare time when I was younger...
My Palace of Dreams
I rushed across the field, through the grasses and the brush
The sun above shone brightly; it knew why I did rush
I clambered up a tree trunk with a smile on my face
A few more feet above I found my very special place
A wide tree branch that gently swayed is where I made my stop
I gazed across the fields below, seeing everything from my top
Then I jumped into a hammock tied between the branches below
I nestled in and let my whole imagination go
I dreamed of valiant heroes and their great heroic deeds
I dreamed of royal knights jousting atop their noble steeds
I dreamed of savage ninjas and their sneaky, clever ways
If I could, I would have stayed there dreaming all my days
This place of mine was sacred, my palace if you will
My kingdom was the surrounding fields, every creek and hill
I was the queen of the kingdom, which I was free to roam
And at that young age I had thought that it could be my home
But alas, it wasn’t so, for soon I heard a shout
Coming from the distance that I needed to come out
I wanted to rush back to my tree as morning welcomed day
But I found I could no longer go, we were moving away
I cried out for my daydream spot, but it was all in vain
I tried to daydream elsewhere, but it wasn’t quite the same
I slowly grew to be older and didn’t weep as much
But I still longed for my palace, my hammock, my field, and such
One day a few years later, I walked through my front door
I noticed in astonishment that boxes lined the floor
I asked my mom what was happening, I gave myself a slap
But I had heard correctly, we were moving back
I ran across the field, my smile burning bright
But I began to notice that something was not right
The sun seemed somewhat dimmer and the flowers all looked bleak
I shook it from my mind, too excited for my peak
But when I arrived at my spot, my face grew very pale
Tears welled up inside my eyes; I let out a mighty wail
The field had been my kingdom and the hammock was my crown
But now my world had shattered, my palace had been cut down
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:50 am
I wrote this when a friend of mine moved away...
Rainbows
A friend is a companion
On our journey down the road of life.
They are there to joke with you,
To celebrate with you,
To talk with you.
They are there to support you,
To raise you up when you’ve fallen,
To make you laugh when you’ve cried.
A true friend is there through thick and thin,
Through good times and bad,
Through sun and through storm.
A life without friends
Is like life without color,
Everything the same:
Dull,
Boring,
Emotionless.
But friends bring rainbows
To the life that was dark.
They bring joy,
Excitement,
And fun.
So a friend should be treasured
And never forgotten,
For the rainbows would fade
And be dark once more.
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:55 am
Just some random haikus I made up on the spot...
Computer
I stare at the screen
Virtual reality
It envelopes me
Television
The TV is king
The living room's it's castle
With many servants
Creative Writing
The paper is blank
I place my ideas there
There is no more room
Siblings
They tug at my hair
They make messes in my room
But I still love them
God's Love
He loves me so much
God is so wonderfully good
He loves without doubt
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:16 am
i have also hve had some of my work published sweatdrop but you are much better than me redface heart heart
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 7:40 pm
whee Well... Thank you! whee
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 2:56 pm
xd can i post one of mine so you can see if it is good or not
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 4:36 pm
3nodding Sure. I don't see why not... Just make sure that you specify that they are your works... 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 3:39 pm
ok then ths onr i wrote to my gf
If I could be your valentine,
I'd carefully hold your heart,
I'd tuck it deep within my own,
Down in the safest part.
I'd show it all the love I have,
Bring smiles it's way each day,
I'd love it like no other,
it would never stray.
You and I, you heart and mine,
Would meld and be as one,
the joyand peace we all could share,
would never be undone.
If only I could show you,
Just all you mean to me,
Then you would feel the passion,
so sweet, and tender.
If you could se within my soul,
How it glows when youreyes shine,
then you would know my words are true,
and, Icould be your Valentine.
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 6:34 pm
hey j, i still have that poem from when i moved 3nodding just stoppin by to say hi!
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Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 3:49 pm
That's pretty good monkkk! 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 6:14 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:30 am
heart thanks redface heart i have a book full of poems i've written. biggrin
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