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| 1. It stinks, is self-contradictory, has no rhythm, is spastic, distasteful, unbelievably depressing, etc. OR I'm sorry, I just don't like it. |
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| 9. I can't deny it was good, but I just couldn't give you the perfect 10. |
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| 10! wow O.o that was awesome. sure its about crying, but none the less just totally awesome / I honestly think it could win a contest. You should publish a book like your best friend Ayah keeps telling you ^_~ |
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 Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:42 pm
Why CanNot Can I?
Why can’t I cry?
I ask myself.
The tears refuse to fall
Have I grown tired?
Have I grown stronger?
They are blinked away.
No longer do they dwell.
My eyes no longer swell
with tears.
I blink them down a drain.
My sadness only wanes.
Not satisfied by tears
it fades away.
if you put anything lower than an 8, I demand you explain yourself because I know for a fact thay my poetry rox and I dare anyone to disagree. if you really think it stinks it has to be for good reasons. not cuz you don't like the topic, not cuz you think its too short. real thought out answers. if you don't care to give one, at least be honest/reasonable when you post in the poll.
thank you. by the way, I'm the one that put the ten. I really think my poetry rox. well, most of them. I do have stinkers. but I wouldn't post those. lol. anyway.
Sweet Days! blaugh
_Secret_Angel_3 heart 4laugh
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