dark dark poetry tell me wat u think

[Kazumi Natsumi]

in the i feel at peace
in the light i feel i burn
wat is wrong am i dead
or am i emo
y do i hate having to be with people
y am i a social outcast  

[demo-chan]

Its very emo. But we can work it, lesse... how about...

in the dark I feel at peace
in the light i feel i burn
These shadows grant me lease
Yet shall I fall within my turn

wat is wrong am i dead
or am i emo
death shudders through my head
not quite gothic, not quite alone

y do i hate having to be social
y do you ostracise me
These sheep, dregs of humanity
do you sleep well knowing how you hurt me?  

[Little I8pizza]

onwhat planet waz that emo?????